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Rocks and River

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Corinne
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0 posted 10-28-1999 09:19 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Corinne

Rocks and River

It happens when we’re sleeping
Focused thoughts come into view
Gentle spirits call a meeting
A place where we pass through

Where mighty rushing rivers flow
Green landscapes burgeoning
And indigo dog violets grow
Patience and love harvesting

You, the stream flowing
I, the shape of stability
Growing, never plateauing
Wearing me smooth, subtly

At times nature tears us apart
She regards us with suspicion
Leaving us with wounded hearts
To renew love sans inhibition

Thoughts pouring onto each other
Repeating rhythms brimming over
Holding forth on terra firma
Fluid and solid, rocks and river

(c) 1999 CM Bailey

© Copyright 1999 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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Wow Corrinne, this is great. Welcome to Passions
Seymour Tabin
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Corinne,
Well done I really enjoyed the read
Watcher666
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Liked this much!!

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Denise
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This is absolutely beautiful, Corinne! Welcome to Passions!

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Denise

 
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