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Timeless Loon

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 10-11-1999 03:23 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

From still waters rise swirling evening mist.
Silence gives way to the loon's haunting cry.
With magic has his eerie song been kissed.
Loon laughter echoes proudly to the sky.

In ebony head rests a crimson eye.
He spreads his wings in a majestic stance.
His regal head tips to point at the sky.
Gracefully folding wings he ends this dance.

His symmetry is etched in black and white.
Breast feathers' hue is like new fallen snow.
His mournful song greets the coming twilight.
With rippling dive the loon chooses to go.


©1999 DreamEvil


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Christopher
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1 posted 10-11-1999 03:28 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

You paint a beautiful picture here my friend. Showing, that there is beauty in your soul.

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Dragoness
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2 posted 10-11-1999 03:29 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

I can see him in flight now.Well done brother dear!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Lucie
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3 posted 10-11-1999 03:30 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Very pretty Dream.. I can almost see the loon.
Dark Angel
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4 posted 10-11-1999 03:30 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Wow, Soul-brother, this is terrific, loved it

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Samuel Coleridge


Michael
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5 posted 10-11-1999 07:17 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Exquisite piece here, Dream. definately one of your best works in my opinion. Left a perfect image in my mind and a smile on my face ...thank you.

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Michael Anderson

When God puts a tear in your eye,
He puts a rainbow in your heart.


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