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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Escape My mind has grown another Id. Beyond this bed it lies. An Ibsen world has made its bid, Two worlds that live and thrive. Escape from pain that stung my brain That guide a nowhere course It either that or go insane To stop and end remorse. Yet torment creeps a shadow back, In wait of trip or fall. Satanic dogs harass my track, It's touch the death of all. I live a sort of interlude, No walls confine my sight. A fantasy of latitude, A world of things that's right. And though we twin in soul report It has one death, forever more. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I can relate to this! Very well done, again, Seymour! ------------------ Denise |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Well done!! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, The bell was rung for more than one, thank you for the read and comment. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
The bell tolled for me too, my friend, great piece, love it!!  ------------------ How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool? ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Watcher, thanks for the well done. Isis, I'm glad you heard the bell. thanks for the response. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Good night, Sy. Thank you for all the great poetry, especially this one. Alison |
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