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Escape

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 10-28-1999 07:13 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Escape

My mind has grown another Id.
Beyond this bed it lies.
An Ibsen world has made its bid,
Two worlds that live and thrive.

Escape from pain that stung my brain
That guide a nowhere course
It either that or go insane
To stop and end remorse.

Yet torment creeps a shadow back,
In wait of trip or fall.
Satanic dogs harass my track,
It's touch the death of all.

I live a sort of interlude,
No walls confine my sight.
A fantasy of latitude,
A world of things that's right.

And though we twin in soul report
It has one death, forever more.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 10-28-1999 09:13 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I can relate to this! Very well done, again, Seymour!

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Denise

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2 posted 10-28-1999 09:25 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Well done!!

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Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 10-28-1999 09:28 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Denise,
The bell was rung for more than one, thank you for the read and comment.
Isis
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4 posted 10-28-1999 09:31 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

The bell tolled for me too, my friend, great piece, love it!!

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~Isis~
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Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 10-28-1999 11:05 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Watcher,
thanks for the well done.
Isis,
I'm glad you heard the bell. thanks for the response.
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6 posted 02-27-2011 12:30 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Good night, Sy.  Thank you for all the great poetry, especially this one.

Alison
 
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