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Richard 33
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since 1999-09-09
Posts 187
glen easton, wv usa

0 posted 1999-10-28 02:43 PM


I have met many on this net, that have touched my heart.

There is one that stands above the rest,
as if I am a part.

My lady fair, a princess with golden hair.

I see just a screen, though your face I see
not.

It really doesn't matter, for it is your heart that I have sought.

I know that now you are still very numb.

I am sorry if this is mushy, or really
rather dumb.

It is that I want to tell you before it's
too late.

It is that there's no controll, it's truely
up to fate....................LOL.

[This message has been edited by Richard 33 (edited 10-28-1999).]

[This message has been edited by Richard 33 (edited 10-28-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 Richard 33 - All Rights Reserved
poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
1 posted 1999-10-28 03:24 PM


Richard...? Has the love bug bitten you too ??? Hhhmmm? Is that what I'm reading here? Do tell all dear Richard! (big grin with even bigger ears!) This was a really really nice little ditty for that special someone....it wasn't "dumb" at all ! I thought is was very genuine....I wish you luck !!

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale


suthern
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
2 posted 1999-10-28 03:42 PM


I enjoyed this one very much!!! It is the heart that matters.
Richard 33
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since 1999-09-09
Posts 187
glen easton, wv usa
3 posted 1999-10-28 04:08 PM


thanx for the wonderful replies, and yes dearest femme, "the love bug" has bitten
me once again, I just hope she comes around!!

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
4 posted 1999-10-28 06:00 PM


*blushing* I am not sure what to say to this sweet Richard. I do not think this is dumb at all. My dearest hope is that I do not hurt you. *kotc* You are very special.
Kitty**
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA
5 posted 1999-10-28 06:32 PM


AHH HAH...So it's Richard and Marilyn HUH??;-)
Sweet poem Rich!

Destiny leads...Follow!

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Kitty**

Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

6 posted 1999-10-28 08:26 PM


This is so sweet!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
7 posted 1999-10-28 10:18 PM


There isn't another more deserving Richard, word of warning though...you hurt her, I'll track you down...LOL
Nice to see the love bug alive and well on passions

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