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Patrick B
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since 1999-10-28
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uk

0 posted 1999-10-28 02:13 PM


I know what love is,do you?
It's when each day I have is blessed because of you,
I know what love is,can you say the same?
It's when my heart beats so quickly when you say my name.
I know what love is,do you think you know?
It's when I hear your voice and my spirit begins to glow,
I know what love is,can you have a guess?
It's when I'm in your presence and I'm such a shaking mess,
I know what love is,is it time to tell?
It's when a second away from you feels like total hell.




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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 1999-10-28 02:40 PM


Patrick B,
It flows right along, enjoyed the read.

tempted heart
New Member
since 1999-10-24
Posts 3

2 posted 1999-10-28 02:49 PM


I totally understand wat uv'e said. Its a very natural reaction to a loved one. Short and sweet.
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-10-28 08:13 PM


Good reading here! Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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