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Forever my love

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Patrick B
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0 posted 10-28-1999 02:02 PM       View Profile for Patrick B   Email Patrick B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patrick B

When do you know that love has died?
When she say's goodbye and your heart shivers?
Or when she tell's you of her love and you know she lied?
Is it the coldness of the night that stays?
Is it the tears that trickle down your face?
Or the painfully long,lonely days?
Is it when the sun turns to cloud and rain?
Or when the warmth turns to cold and pain?
I would have loved you forever my love,
I would have let your heart soar to the sky,
Two souls gliding like the wings of a dove,
You stole my heart and I could never love another,
My life is barren,my soul in grief,
You were my smile,my music,my wonderful lover.
I will love you until my body joins my heart in death.

© Copyright 1999 Patrick B - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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1 posted 10-28-1999 08:06 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Nicely done!

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Very nicely done, Patrick. And very touching.

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