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The Cherry tree

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Patrick B
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0 posted 10-28-1999 01:51 PM       View Profile for Patrick B   Email Patrick B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patrick B

Should we meet by the cherry tree?
I need to claim you my love,don't you see?
Under the bluest sky let your lips touch mine,
make me tremble make me shine,
Should we wait for the birds to sing?
Or be carried away by anglel's wing?
Let the blossom rain down like snow,
like the tears of love,let you know,
Listen to the stream play our song,
It sighs our tune,endlessly long,
Should we watch the butterfly?
Beautiful and graceful it spirals the sky,
So much beauty surrounds me,
Yet it's only you I can see.




[This message has been edited by Patrick B (edited 10-28-1999).]
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RSEvans
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1 posted 10-28-1999 02:03 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

Well done.

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.
Watcher666
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Liked this much! Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
hoot_owl_rn
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I like this, well written
Denise
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4 posted 10-30-1999 08:36 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful, Patrick! I enjoyed this!

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Denise

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