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Barely Edible

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brandondinsmore
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0 posted 10-28-1999 01:07 PM       View Profile for brandondinsmore   Email brandondinsmore   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for brandondinsmore

Barely edible
Undigestible
Far from tranquil
My words are lost in an effortless...
kamikaze mission to the moon...
The moon, a place of sterility
Engulfs...Swallows...Digests
Yes, IT digests my words, but no one
No one
Hears my importance...

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poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 10-28-1999 03:52 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Wow, this is actually a really powerful little piece ! I believe it deserves to go back to the top!! Short is often so very sweet...

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale

Marilyn
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2 posted 10-28-1999 06:59 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Definately powerful words brandon. I think this deserves to go back to the top as well. I am not sure if I have said this before....Welcome to Passions. I am sorry if this is a little late...
Julie
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3 posted 10-28-1999 07:48 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Brandon,
I too welcome you to Passions. Don't think for a minute your words aren't heard or digested...I've been reading a lot of your stuff, I apologize I have just now replied but will do better in the future. I think you are a profoundly deep thinker and have great insight...and this piece is evidence of that...I look forward to seeing your postings in all forums...
Watcher666
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4 posted 10-28-1999 08:46 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Your words are heard and enjoyed! Liked this one.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 10-28-1999 09:00 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Welcome to passions. This is well stated, I really enjoyed it.
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