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Iloveit
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0 posted 10-28-1999 12:40 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Iloveit

Imprisoned am I by you, my love
your touch a breath to my flame
desire rages beyond measure

no other will do.

Passions rise in the morn
and under cover of the night
and once quelled, yet again and again.

If I bang my cup on the bars
it is only for more of you
fill me, your passion mine, mine yours.

My sentence shall not be paroled early
argue against it, yes I would,
I want the full life term.

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1999 Iloveit

© Copyright 1999 Iloveit - All Rights Reserved
RSEvans
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1 posted 10-28-1999 12:52 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

A prisoner of love? Great imagery.

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2 posted 10-28-1999 01:27 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

ILoveit: I love "If I bang my cup on the bars"...

HUSG

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3 posted 10-28-1999 01:39 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Will ya quit banging that *&^*&! cup on the bars???? How am I supposed to get any sleep? *G*

I like this one very much, Lovey... especially the last verse (and the mental picture of you banging that cup on the bars! *G*)
Iloveit
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4 posted 10-28-1999 01:55 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

RS...thanks

and Rainbow girl thanks sometimes I am inspired.... lol by what though I don't know

suthern if I'd a known that my cup banging was keeping you awake I'd of started a lot sooner....lolol but just think even if I stop ...you will still have that mental picture to keep you company lolol teach you to wave that bat around us prisoners *g*
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5 posted 10-28-1999 03:58 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

It would be great to be your guardin' angel! Prisoners of love....ain't we all? Nice, K.
Iloveit
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6 posted 10-28-1999 04:38 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

yep we sure are, and yep if I was gonna have an angel guardin' me, you would be perfect
we could talk about rhyme and meter through the bars, both of which I am lacking in *g*
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7 posted 10-28-1999 09:14 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Enjoyed this much!!

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hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 10-28-1999 09:50 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I Love It....wonderfully written Iloveit, you did well by this one. Now take your bow
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9 posted 10-28-1999 10:04 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very very lovely!

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Very clever Iloveit.....liked this much I did....

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devina
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11 posted 10-28-1999 11:54 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

GREAT! AS IF THE BARS ARE BINDING YOU BY LOVE. YOUR MENTAL IMAGING IS WONDERFUL!
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12 posted 10-29-1999 02:27 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Love the imagery, great job

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Michael
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13 posted 10-29-1999 02:32 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Oh how this one rings true in my life. I will not be freed soon enough from this prison that keeps life hungering, (Although, I see a means to release soon, in mine). Wonderful poem. I was wondering what all that racket was, here, let me bang my cup too.

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Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?


JTF
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14 posted 10-29-1999 07:17 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

What's this all about Lovey being tied up to the bars of her bed and making so much noise Auntie can't sleep ?? ... Hmmm, that must be my funny English ... LOL

Seriously, great one Lovey ...

WhtDove
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15 posted 10-29-1999 08:18 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I like how you did this! Was unique! Banging on the bars...I want the full life term. Well stated!
Iloveit
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16 posted 11-01-1999 05:39 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

ok, don't know what my server is up to, but finally got the hang of getting a posting box, and wanted to tell everyone thanks, really glad you all liked it
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big smile
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