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Dear Mr. Moon
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Dear Mr. Moon |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Dear Mr. Moon, How lovely that your bright beams shine You are talked about all the time In poets verse and nursery rhymes In books on history you are there Pictures are painted, their works of art You've capture the souls of mortal hearts Your ring ever glowing a gray seal blue shinning white light for the world to view You brighten and lighten are midnight swims Creating an aura for love to begin As lovers lane on a hill so high Would not be the same with out you in the sky There are Crazy people in the world you know They come out to play beneath your glow Then the dimi loon comes to view And crazy's go away awaiting the full of you Such mystery you hold within man To imagine from the oceans on earth you began And lifted to the sky for us to adore With the essence of beauty in the smile that you've worn This is my message to you Mr. Moon To thank you for such a spectacular view So handsome and charming, you are such a delight I look forward to seeing you every night Tori 1999 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink vlh. |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
The man in the moon is a lady....ta de daa da. Nice flow. I like this one. ------------------ No matter where you go, somebody's probably already been there and gotten the parking space... |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
lol I think you may be right RS..lol thanks |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Loved the imagery in here! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tori~ Digging through the archives ... what perfect timing to find this jewel after the full-of-moon~ A delightful, delightful read~ I tend to think that the moon possesses such delicate feminine qualities ...  Get back in here and *gift* us with more of your poetic thoughts~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love this...I love the night sky! You wrote it well |
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