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Dear Mr. Moon

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tori
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0 posted 10-28-1999 12:27 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Dear Mr. Moon,

How lovely that your bright beams shine
You are talked about all the time
In poets verse and nursery rhymes
In books on history you are there

Pictures are painted, their works of art
You've capture the souls of mortal hearts
Your ring ever glowing a gray seal blue
shinning white light for the world to view

You brighten and lighten are midnight swims
Creating an aura for love to begin
As lovers lane on a hill so high
Would not be the same with out you in the sky

There are Crazy people in the world you know
They come out to play beneath your glow
Then the dimi loon comes to view
And crazy's go away awaiting the full of you

Such mystery you hold within man
To imagine from the oceans on earth you began
And lifted to the sky for us to adore
With the essence of beauty in the smile that you've worn

This is my message to you Mr. Moon
To thank you for such a spectacular view
So handsome and charming, you are such a delight
I look forward to seeing you every night


Tori 1999
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RSEvans
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1 posted 10-28-1999 12:41 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

The man in the moon is a lady....ta de daa da. Nice flow. I like this one.

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tori
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2 posted 10-28-1999 03:14 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

lol I think you may be right RS..lol thanks
Watcher666
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3 posted 10-28-1999 08:15 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Loved the imagery in here!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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4 posted 01-30-2002 11:35 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Tori~
Digging through the archives ...
what perfect timing to find this jewel after the full-of-moon~

A delightful, delightful read~
I tend to think that the moon possesses such delicate feminine qualities ...

Get back in here and *gift* us with more of your poetic thoughts~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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5 posted 01-01-2003 04:26 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

love this...I love the night sky! You wrote it well
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