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RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

0 posted 1999-10-28 12:11 PM

--my first attempt at acrostic--

Longing for the touch
Others cannot give.
Voiceless angels watch
Every time you move.

I love you is all I can say,
Silenced by your sultry sway.

Why did you choose me
Out of all you could possess?
Neither of us understand
Desire's deep carress.
Each of us now has each other,
Romance in full bloom.
Forever now comes easily
Upon our lips. I swoon.
Love is wonderful.

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No matter where you go, somebody's probably already been there and gotten the parking space...

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

1 posted 1999-10-28 03:49 PM

***singing "Rub, rub rub your face - in acrostic mud - - !! ***

hehehe Robert, why in the world would you think I'd "rub your face in the mud on this? LOL You are certainly a funny man, but yes...of late, everyone in here is making me look bad with all these fancy poems....that are all just so-so...(perfection in form blah blah blah!) Argh! The whole forum is beginning to get as articulate as Nan! It's that classroom of hers they're all attending!! LOL

Well, in the meantime, I'll just keep writing my saucey stuff in Adult, and my "beginner's level" stuff in here......(stomping off pouting!)

*** By the way - - GREAT JOB for a first-timer !!

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

2 posted 1999-10-28 04:38 PM

Nice first effort, Robert.

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-10-28 09:12 PM

Nicely done....enjoyed the read!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-10-28 09:54 PM

A wonderful Acrostic. This is nicely done, it stands alone even without the acrostic it's a great poem

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 1999-10-28 09:59 PM

Yep, love is wonderful and so is this poem of yours! I love acrostics too!

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Denise

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

6 posted 1999-10-29 03:21 AM

Excellent, Robert, especially for the first one...Love truly is wonderful...great theme.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?

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