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Love is Wonderful

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RSEvans
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0 posted 10-28-1999 12:11 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RSEvans

--my first attempt at acrostic--

Longing for the touch
Others cannot give.
Voiceless angels watch
Every time you move.

I love you is all I can say,
Silenced by your sultry sway.

Why did you choose me
Out of all you could possess?
Neither of us understand
Desire's deep carress.
Each of us now has each other,
Romance in full bloom.
Forever now comes easily
Upon our lips. I swoon.
Love is wonderful.




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No matter where you go, somebody's probably already been there and gotten the parking space...
© Copyright 1999 Rob Evans - All Rights Reserved
poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 10-28-1999 03:49 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

***singing "Rub, rub rub your face - in acrostic mud - - !! ***

hehehe Robert, why in the world would you think I'd "rub your face in the mud on this? LOL You are certainly a funny man, but yes...of late, everyone in here is making me look bad with all these fancy poems....that are all just so-so...(perfection in form blah blah blah!) Argh! The whole forum is beginning to get as articulate as Nan! It's that classroom of hers they're all attending!! LOL

Well, in the meantime, I'll just keep writing my saucey stuff in Adult, and my "beginner's level" stuff in here......(stomping off pouting!)

*** By the way - - GREAT JOB for a first-timer !!

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Balladeer
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2 posted 10-28-1999 04:38 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Nice first effort, Robert.
Watcher666
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3 posted 10-28-1999 09:12 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Nicely done....enjoyed the read!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 10-28-1999 09:54 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

A wonderful Acrostic. This is nicely done, it stands alone even without the acrostic it's a great poem
Denise
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5 posted 10-28-1999 09:59 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yep, love is wonderful and so is this poem of yours! I love acrostics too!

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Denise

Michael
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6 posted 10-29-1999 03:21 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Excellent, Robert, especially for the first one...Love truly is wonderful...great theme.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?


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