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Another pantoum from Nan's class. : )

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Munda
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0 posted 10-28-1999 10:10 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

It was such a sweet caress
on that weary dreary day
longing for my bonnie lass
solemn grief ate me away

On that weary dreary day
Death came passing by my door
solemn grief ate me away
heartache mine forevermore

Death came passing by my door
looking at my soppy eyes
heartache mine forever more
bonnie lass she just had died

looking at my soppy eyes
feeling sorry in a way
bonnie lass she just had died
said "this is your lucky day"

feeling sorry in a way
her kiss cold yet sweet to me
said "this is your lucky day"
your sweet bonnie lass you’ll see

her kiss cold yet sweet to me
longing for my bonnie lass
your sweet bonnie lass you’ll see
it was such a sweet caress



[This message has been edited by Munda (edited 10-28-1999).]
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Skyfyre
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1 posted 10-28-1999 10:28 AM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

I thought your choice for your beginning/ending line was very well-chosen. I enjoyed this.

--Kess

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2 posted 10-28-1999 11:55 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Goed Werk
enjoyed.
Munda
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3 posted 10-28-1999 06:40 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Skyfyre, thank you and you too Mike. By the way....are you Dutch ???
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4 posted 10-28-1999 06:56 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Nope... but a lawyer here in Kansas is.. I called him and asked how to say good job...
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5 posted 10-28-1999 08:35 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Nicely done! Enjoyed the read.

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Well done Munda
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Wonderful, Munda! I enjoyed this!

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Denise

Munda
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8 posted 10-30-1999 07:57 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Watcher, Ruth, Denise, Thank you so much. : ) and Mike, LOL, thanks ! It sure is different to get a Dutch reply and appreciated a lot. : )

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