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Out of the Blue

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Lori
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since 10-28-1999
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Pulaski,Tn. USA


0 posted 10-28-1999 10:03 AM       View Profile for Lori   Email Lori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lori's Home Page   View IP for Lori

My soul searches and wants to fly,
I raise my hands,
Yet I could not reach.
Even though I tried.

Out of the blue,
Like a clue.
You came and lifted me up.

I feel like we have met before,
We seek to know each other more & more.
Across the miles,
A distance away.


I find myself thinking of you,
Throughout the day.
Then as nightfall darkens the sky,
Moon rises as I watch with my eyes.

I blow you a tender kiss,
Carries with the wind.
To let you know, from me to you.
How much your truly missed.
© Copyright 1999 Lori - All Rights Reserved
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on the threshold of a dream


1 posted 10-28-1999 10:05 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I like this, Lori... Welcome!
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


2 posted 10-28-1999 08:14 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I can relate to this one
Watcher666
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since 10-13-1999
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3 posted 10-28-1999 08:22 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Lori
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since 10-28-1999
Posts 11
Pulaski,Tn. USA


4 posted 10-28-1999 08:32 PM       View Profile for Lori   Email Lori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lori's Home Page   View IP for Lori

Thank you, was kinda scared to put poems on here...but also would like to be told if something is wrong with them..always room for improvement.
I just enjoy writing.
 
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