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Lee Benthin
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since 10-28-1999
Posts 19
Marysville, WA USA


0 posted 10-28-1999 03:28 AM       View Profile for Lee Benthin   Email Lee Benthin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lee Benthin

who?
who are you kidding?
when you tell me, you don' think about me?

me.
i've got somebody
and he tells me, that he needs me so.

oh...
he and you are driving me wild.
you've got me feelin' inside,
i'm just a child
and he holds my hand, while you hold my heart
he understands,
but you're tearin' me apart.

oh. . .
who?
who are we kidding?
when we say that we, can put out the fire?

love.
it's just a feeling
it starts as attraction, then turns to desire

yea. . .
who?
who am i kidding?
when i say that, it don't matter to me?

you.
you keep me dreaming.
maybe someday, all my dreams will come true.

oh...
he and you are driving me wild.
you've got me feelin' inside,
i'm just a child
and he holds my hand, while you hold my heart
he understands,
but you're tearin' me apart.
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Watcher666
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since 10-13-1999
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1 posted 10-28-1999 09:09 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Nicely done.

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Star Fairy 2
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2 posted 10-28-1999 09:37 PM       View Profile for Star Fairy 2   Email Star Fairy 2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Star Fairy 2

wow... this would be a very beautiful song!

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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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Lee Benthin
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since 10-28-1999
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Marysville, WA USA


3 posted 10-29-1999 12:52 AM       View Profile for Lee Benthin   Email Lee Benthin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lee Benthin

WOW. Thanks everybody.
Denise
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4 posted 10-29-1999 10:10 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This would make a great song! Good one, Lee!

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Denise

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