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Here I am;

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For_Never
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0 posted 10-28-1999 01:21 AM       View Profile for For_Never   Email For_Never   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for For_Never

I cannot be saved
I don't want it anyway
fall, falling away...
laughing as I dance and play
it's hard to care
...when I lost myself today..
gone, gone away

When I lie,
lye in the garden cold and grey..
the singing of perfection within.
lost within,
lost to stay..
I am left again today..

Solitude...
could it be a phase?
changed within,
will it stay?
I don't know but it is time to create
That new me... who I must be today....

Edward A. Beerman,
8-31-97
© Copyright 1999 Edward A. Beerman - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-28-1999 01:29 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Enjoyed the read. Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Michael
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2 posted 10-28-1999 07:31 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Your writing is deep in some of the unholier emotions...truly enjoyable to a creature of the Dark such as I. Good work.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?


 
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