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Spread You Wings

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tori
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since 06-18-99
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Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA


0 posted 10-28-1999 12:37 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

My Little boy is leaving
Is gone from Mothers sight
I sometimes here him crying
In the middle of the night

He's searching for his freedom
He's going for his youth
I have to let him go now
There is nothing I can do

Can you hear the calling
The whisper in the rain
Raindrops are falling
To hide this Mothers pain~

Little Eagle spread your wings
Fly unto the night
Across the blue gray sky
Spread your wings in flight

Climb up to the heavens
Rest upon the wind
When your flight is over
Remember where you've been

Tori 1999

For Wayne... sniff sniff
© Copyright 1999 Victoria Hosier/tori - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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since 10-13-1999
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1 posted 10-28-1999 01:25 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Beautiful verse. Liked this much.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


2 posted 10-28-1999 09:24 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Tori....I like this one a lot, beautifully written.
Sunshine
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3 posted 10-28-1999 03:07 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

ahh, the rumblings of empty rooms. Cheer up dear - you will find many things to fulfill the empty moments, and then wonder how in the world you ever did everything you now do, and have raised a child, too!
tori
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Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA


4 posted 10-28-1999 03:12 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Thanks so much guy's!!
Ohme
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5 posted 10-28-1999 03:30 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

aaaaah, Empty nest, here. But I see a bunch of those little turkeys flying around.
Like the poem.
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