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tori
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA

0 posted 1999-10-28 12:37 PM


My Little boy is leaving
Is gone from Mothers sight
I sometimes here him crying
In the middle of the night

He's searching for his freedom
He's going for his youth
I have to let him go now
There is nothing I can do

Can you hear the calling
The whisper in the rain
Raindrops are falling
To hide this Mothers pain~

Little Eagle spread your wings
Fly unto the night
Across the blue gray sky
Spread your wings in flight

Climb up to the heavens
Rest upon the wind
When your flight is over
Remember where you've been

Tori 1999

For Wayne... sniff sniff

© Copyright 1999 Victoria Hosier/tori - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-10-28 01:25 AM


Beautiful verse. Liked this much.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-10-28 09:24 AM


Tori....I like this one a lot, beautifully written.
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 1999-10-28 03:07 PM


ahh, the rumblings of empty rooms. Cheer up dear - you will find many things to fulfill the empty moments, and then wonder how in the world you ever did everything you now do, and have raised a child, too!
tori
Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA
4 posted 1999-10-28 03:12 PM


Thanks so much guy's!!
Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 816
Texas
5 posted 1999-10-28 03:30 PM


aaaaah, Empty nest, here. But I see a bunch of those little turkeys flying around.
Like the poem.

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