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Enotneicna
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since 1999-06-06
Posts 340
Oakland, Or, USA

0 posted 1999-10-28 12:26 PM


I wrote this for my halfside. The 31st of Oct. will be our 29th anniversary. All of it is written in perfect tense except for the last line, that is because he is still touching my life.

You have stood beside me
Thru times when life's trials and tribulations
.....were almost to much to bear
To the times when life's rewards
.....have blessed us immeasurably

You have nurtured my dreams
Most times above your own
Always encouraging, often advising;
.....never critisizing

You have fulfilled my fantasies
No matter how far-reaching or inconcievible
.....they may have seemed

You have filled my world with love and happiness
And I wonder if you truly know
The measure of how deeply you touch my life

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Sharon Lee Rotondi
(Enotneicna)
http://members.rosenet.net/wtw/



© Copyright 1999 Sharon Lee Wilcox (Enotneicna) - All Rights Reserved
Julie
Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
1 posted 1999-10-28 08:42 PM


What a wonderful thing to have a loving supportive husband. Happy Anniversary!
Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-10-28 08:43 PM


Beautiful!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 1999-10-28 09:02 PM


What a wonderful tribute to your better half
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-10-30 09:53 PM


Happy Anniversary! Wonderful poem!

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Denise


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