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Enotneicna
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since 1999-06-06
Posts 340
Oakland, Or, USA

0 posted 1999-10-28 12:22 PM


Sleep brings dreams visions
.....Upon wings soft as velvet
..........Smooth as satin
...............Delicate as lace

Dreams illusions
.....Bright as liquid moonglow
..........Dark as ebony hue
...............Clear as a midnight rainbow

Speak in symbolism and half-truths
.....Look deep within
..........Past the mirror of your soul
..............To what lies beyond

There, tucked carefully away
.....In a corner of your being
..........You will find the means
...............To decipher the message

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Sharon Lee Rotondi
(Enotneicna)
http://members.rosenet.net/wtw/



© Copyright 1999 Sharon Lee Wilcox (Enotneicna) - All Rights Reserved
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-10-28 03:25 AM


Like this!
starchild
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since 1999-10-22
Posts 59
manchester, england
2 posted 1999-10-28 06:44 AM


A RIGHT RIVETING READ
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-10-28 01:34 PM


Liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

RSEvans
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since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA
4 posted 1999-10-28 02:38 PM


of sleep and dreams...
Captured my attention. Thank you.

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 1999-10-28 08:36 PM


Very nice
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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6 posted 1999-10-30 09:20 PM


This is so lovely, Sharon!

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Denise


WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
7 posted 1999-10-30 09:44 PM


This was really neat. I like the way you set it up. I like the message.
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