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Stuck In The Middle

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tori
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since 06-18-99
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Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA


0 posted 10-27-1999 11:54 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

I am trapped in a three ring circus
And the doors are all shut tight
Up and down are in the middle
With no right or wrong insight

The animals are restless
No food to feed their souls
I have bought a ticket to disaster
With the engines on overload

Once a calm and pure love
Engulfed my loving heart
And then came another
That tore this love apart

It hit before I knew it
I had no time to breathe
It was wrong, to step in to it
But I could not bare to leave

In time there came moment
With both loves I could share
A love so everlasting
It was like heaven being there

As feelings were surrounded
With love and hurt and grief
I stood there astounded
Looking in to see

I knew then I was wrong love
But from the loves
I could not choose
It was I alone out here
It was I, who would loose

Me,, me,, me,, rang loud and clear
I could not separate it from my mind
Is there a back door out of here
No answers came with time

So I'm stuck here in the middle
With out a door on either side
I wish that I was little
So I could run away and hide.


Tori 1999

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WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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1 posted 10-27-1999 11:59 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Aww Tori, this was was really well written and oh so sad! I'll hide ya!
merlynh
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since 09-26-1999
Posts 444
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2 posted 10-28-1999 12:03 AM       View Profile for merlynh   Email merlynh   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for merlynh

There was a hint of some animal lust here. But, yeah...it's part of love. Nicely done.
tori
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since 06-18-99
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Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA


3 posted 10-28-1999 12:17 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Thanks WhtDove I knew I could count on you to hide me...lol

Thank you merlynh.. animal lust can sometimes be the best part ...lol

Watcher666
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4 posted 10-28-1999 01:23 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

So sad! Good read here.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
passing shadows
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5 posted 05-16-2004 07:27 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I understand
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