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sweetest sunset

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candace
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0 posted 10-27-1999 11:11 PM       View Profile for candace   Email candace   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for candace



glistening water drops,
drizzle deep beneath my soul

mystical memoirs of colors,
shattering the dark light

vividly speaking,
he walks closer to me

glancing in my direction,
causing a motion of satisfaction

softness of his kiss,
wetness of his embrace

quivering insanity,
echoing,defiantly within

touch of his hand,
slowly shadowing my face

the longest touch,
the sweetest embrace
© Copyright 1999 candace - All Rights Reserved
Sally S.
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1 posted 10-27-1999 11:40 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

To me, I see two lovers..embracing amidst the darkness of night during a summer storm. Is that correct? I like the imagery.
Watcher666
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2 posted 10-28-1999 01:18 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Nicely done

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Julie
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3 posted 10-29-1999 08:47 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

This one deserves another go around...nice imagery, good feeling.
Denise
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4 posted 10-29-1999 08:52 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I agree with Sally, Watcher and Julie, very lovely!

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Denise

 
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