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RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

0 posted 1999-10-27 08:59 PM


The Lonely Hours

The hours after midnight
are for lovers
and criminals
with the lonely in between.
A time that silence is
an enemy
when the only other sounds are
each breath
inhaled....exhaled
and the bleeding of the heart
counting seconds
in an endless night
of loneliness.

RB


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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

© Copyright 1999 RobertB - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-10-27 09:08 PM


Hey, Robert where 'ya been. (I'm getting a little low on cash). Another great one though a bit sad. Like life, sometimes they are! So here's a smile for 'ya!

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Denise

RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL
2 posted 1999-10-27 09:10 PM


Hi Denise!!

I got sent a virus from another forum. Lost everything on my computer.
But, like a bad penny I am back!!!

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Denise
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3 posted 1999-10-27 09:12 PM


Didn't we tell ya to stop arguing with those people! Now see what they did! Hope ya learned your lesson now!

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Denise

RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL
4 posted 1999-10-27 09:20 PM


yes ma'am...I larned my lesson alrighty.

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
5 posted 1999-10-27 11:23 PM


Soul brother...I can relate to this, as you well know. Great job and I am very glad to see you have found your way home.
Sally S.
Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847
Ohio
6 posted 1999-10-27 11:36 PM


Robert,
What a sad poem...whew! Sorry about the computer sickness!!!
Here's your prescription....
Read 3 poems every 10 minutes for 7-10 days and respond as needed. (after the 10 days are up...repeat the steps.) Thank you. OH! And don't forget to call....oops...nevermind. LOL Glad you are back and recouping from the virus.

Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

7 posted 1999-10-28 01:17 AM


Welcome back Robert....you were missed! Loved the poem!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

RobertB
Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL
8 posted 1999-10-28 07:58 AM


Mmmmmm home...good.

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
9 posted 1999-10-28 08:11 PM


Well done Robert and welcome back
Julie
Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
10 posted 1999-10-28 08:26 PM


When you're feelin' lonely
in the midnight hour
Dial into Passions so your
friends can send you a flower.

Nice work Robert.

Star Fairy 2
Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
11 posted 1999-10-28 08:34 PM


robert
wonderful job!!
loved it very much
a little sad.. but very nice

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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL
12 posted 1999-10-29 07:49 AM


I liked doing this sad poem. felt good to write it awhile back.

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

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