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Isis
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0 posted 1999-10-27 08:35 PM



Hear me silver sister moon,
Shining in the blue,
If only I had wings to fly,
I would fly to you.

A beacon in the heavens,
A mystical light for all to see,
A warming and comforting torch,
When the darkness hems in on me.

A companion to the sailor,
As he toils upon the sea,
A glow in the curtain of night,
When in your fully glory there is nothing more moving to see.

You gently pull the oceans,
And show them the way,
Setting their courses daily,
A firefly with which it plays.

A bright light in the desert,
A compass up so high,
A guiding light on a mountain range,
A ghostly galleon sailing the skies.

A depth of beauty still virtually untold,
A friend to man and beast,
One single orb bathed in gold,
A true miracle to say the least.

I thankyou silver sister moon,
For watching over all,
For guiding countless journeys,
I'll always listen for your call.


© Copyright 1999 Isis - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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In the space between moments
1 posted 1999-10-27 09:18 PM


I love the moon....this is a beautiful, magical piece of work.

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller



Denise
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2 posted 1999-10-27 09:28 PM


Very lovely, Isis! A magnificent picture!

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Denise

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 1999-10-27 09:36 PM


Isis,
Enjoyed the read.

WhtDove
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4 posted 1999-10-27 10:04 PM


Great work my friend!
Marilyn
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5 posted 1999-10-27 11:14 PM


Ahhh....I told you my friend. Winderful. The Moon is the only thing our poems have in common....I would never be angry or hurt if you post a poem with a similar name. Keep them coming my friend.
Watcher666
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6 posted 1999-10-28 01:02 AM


Wonderful read!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Isis
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7 posted 1999-10-28 02:43 AM


Thanks Alwye, Denise, WhtDove and Watcher and Seymour.
Marilyn, glad you understood my friend

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How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool?
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Michael
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8 posted 1999-10-28 06:25 AM


Quite a piece, Isis,
I love this...some vivid imagery, i can feel myself flying, sailing...wonderful work.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?



starchild
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9 posted 1999-10-28 06:42 AM


VERY NICE
U K Hero
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10 posted 1999-10-28 06:55 AM


Top notch Isis, a lot of depth here.
I loved it very much thankyou.

Pepper
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11 posted 1999-10-28 10:13 AM


Very, very lovely Isis......

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!

Systematic Decay
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That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
12 posted 1999-10-28 02:40 PM


Isis, I really love this one...great work here.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

hoot_owl_rn
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13 posted 1999-10-28 08:40 PM


Very beautiful
Isis
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14 posted 1999-10-28 09:24 PM


Thanks one and all, glad you liked it so much
Thanks too to Michael, glad you got so much from it

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How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool?
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



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