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Silver Sister Moon

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Isis
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0 posted 10-27-1999 08:35 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis


Hear me silver sister moon,
Shining in the blue,
If only I had wings to fly,
I would fly to you.

A beacon in the heavens,
A mystical light for all to see,
A warming and comforting torch,
When the darkness hems in on me.

A companion to the sailor,
As he toils upon the sea,
A glow in the curtain of night,
When in your fully glory there is nothing more moving to see.

You gently pull the oceans,
And show them the way,
Setting their courses daily,
A firefly with which it plays.

A bright light in the desert,
A compass up so high,
A guiding light on a mountain range,
A ghostly galleon sailing the skies.

A depth of beauty still virtually untold,
A friend to man and beast,
One single orb bathed in gold,
A true miracle to say the least.

I thankyou silver sister moon,
For watching over all,
For guiding countless journeys,
I'll always listen for your call.

© Copyright 1999 Isis - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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1 posted 10-27-1999 09:18 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

I love the moon....this is a beautiful, magical piece of work.

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller


Denise
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2 posted 10-27-1999 09:28 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very lovely, Isis! A magnificent picture!

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Denise
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 10-27-1999 09:36 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Isis,
Enjoyed the read.
WhtDove
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4 posted 10-27-1999 10:04 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Great work my friend!
Marilyn
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5 posted 10-27-1999 11:14 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Ahhh....I told you my friend. Winderful. The Moon is the only thing our poems have in common....I would never be angry or hurt if you post a poem with a similar name. Keep them coming my friend.
Watcher666
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6 posted 10-28-1999 01:02 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Wonderful read!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Isis
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7 posted 10-28-1999 02:43 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Thanks Alwye, Denise, WhtDove and Watcher and Seymour.
Marilyn, glad you understood my friend

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How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool?
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Michael
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8 posted 10-28-1999 06:25 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Quite a piece, Isis,
I love this...some vivid imagery, i can feel myself flying, sailing...wonderful work.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?


starchild
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9 posted 10-28-1999 06:42 AM       View Profile for starchild   Email starchild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starchild

VERY NICE
U K Hero
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10 posted 10-28-1999 06:55 AM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

Top notch Isis, a lot of depth here.
I loved it very much thankyou.
Pepper
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11 posted 10-28-1999 10:13 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Very, very lovely Isis......

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!
Systematic Decay
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12 posted 10-28-1999 02:40 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Isis, I really love this one...great work here.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
hoot_owl_rn
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Very beautiful
Isis
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14 posted 10-28-1999 09:24 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Thanks one and all, glad you liked it so much
Thanks too to Michael, glad you got so much from it

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How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool?
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


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