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Punk
New Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 3


0 posted 1999-10-27 08:33 PM


A minipulative.
A sinner with the heart of an angel.
A demond with the soul of a wannabe Jesus.
A screw up with an A+.
An outcast with a fit in heart, a fit in smile.
An annoyant with a long to be heard.
A confused girl with the wisdom of a woman.
A hater in love.
A noticed wrong in a world of wrongs, that longs to be right.

Im only 14 but i feel like all the emotions are rushing through me. My heart soars with emotions of a love and im so very scared and so very alone. im glad i found a place i could post all of this, expect more soon. ~punk

[This message has been edited by Punk (edited 10-27-1999).]

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Lynn
Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.
1 posted 1999-10-27 08:41 PM



Punk....Welcome! I'm not but 15 and I am so happy that I found this place also. It gives me something to do that I enjoy. I love reading poetry and that includes yours. (HUGS)

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-10-27 08:46 PM


Welcome Punk! You'll fit right in here I know. It's a wonderful place to sort through and deal with emotions or problems, none of us could live without it!

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How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool?
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-10-27 08:46 PM


Oh those teen years! They can be oh so very intense! But that is quite normal. One day things will calm down a bit! You seem to have a gift for writing. Writing is one of the best ways to deal with swirling emotions. So write, write, write! And smile!
Some day you'll be 'old' like me!

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Denise

Lynn
Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.
4 posted 1999-10-27 09:03 PM


sorry!

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Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

5 posted 1999-10-27 11:51 PM


Welcome!! Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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