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Lost Love

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charamyst
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since 10-27-1999
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0 posted 10-27-1999 07:23 PM       View Profile for charamyst   Email charamyst   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for charamyst

I feel so void
deep inside
pain forever growing
tears welling in my eyes
stop the time
and take me back
before.........

when the love was so fresh and new
your touch would electrify me
your gaze sustain me
please take me back

this void
so unbearable
unfillable
it takes my breath away
if only I could have that love again
even if it were just for a day

I plead and pray
but to no avail
it seems this void
will remain...... an ever growing
deep despair

clutching and pulling
away, away
from the deep dark cloud
but its slowly engulfing me
I want to make it stop

fighting, kicking, clawing
its no use
its so strong it takes me
I feel all alone
stop

just one day is all I ask
take me back to love before it was lost


© Copyright 1999 charamyst - All Rights Reserved
starboards
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since 10-14-1999
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1 posted 10-27-1999 07:31 PM       View Profile for starboards   Email starboards   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starboards

I really like this poem because it is so lifelike and so truthfull...i hope that u find someother love to hold on to...looking forward to reading more of your works



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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"
Justman
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2 posted 10-27-1999 09:02 PM       View Profile for Justman   Email Justman   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Justman

This is really good. Look forward to more of your work.
Denise
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3 posted 10-27-1999 09:02 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Charamyst this is beautiful! I guess we've all been in that spot! Sure hurts. Expressed so well. Welcome to Passions!

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Denise
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4 posted 10-27-1999 09:16 PM       View Profile for freespiritfem   Email freespiritfem   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for freespiritfem

Charamyst....i felt all of your emotions....some advice_I was feeling the same way... as you expressed in this poem...and when i felt ALL HOPE WAS GONE....and i would never feel the "deep desire and passion", that I had once experienced...let me tell ya...it snuck up on me and bit me on the Ass!!!..So..please dont Give UP...when you least excpet it...it will find you...maybe even from the one wrote this about...and if not...there will be Someone else!!!
I send "YOU' this BIG_O_CYBER_HUGG!!
And this agin was a very intense and expressive poem....Welcome too "Passion"s"..I haven't been here long...but I can tell you there are some really GREAT and Caring People here!!!! Looking forward to more of your work!!!

HUGGS!!!!

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Paula Diane S.
Alwye
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5 posted 10-27-1999 09:39 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

I completely understand this, Charamyst. This is moving work, and I'm glad you've come to passions! I'll look for more!

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller


Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 10-27-1999 09:57 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Charamyst,
Enjoyed the read and welcome to passions.
Watcher666
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7 posted 10-28-1999 12:05 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Know the feeling well.Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Severn
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8 posted 10-28-1999 03:17 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

How sad - but expressed so well. Echoing welcomes - I hope you find comfort here.
charamyst
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9 posted 10-28-1999 05:45 AM       View Profile for charamyst   Email charamyst   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for charamyst

Thanks everyone for your encouraging words and greetings. Its has been a long time since I have tried to express feelings, emotions, ideas, et into words. Reading other peoples work and knowing I dont have to be perfect here helps me to open up more. Hope to post again soon. Huggs to all.
Laurie
 
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