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Lost Love |
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charamyst New Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 6 |
I feel so void deep inside pain forever growing tears welling in my eyes stop the time and take me back before......... when the love was so fresh and new your touch would electrify me your gaze sustain me please take me back this void so unbearable unfillable it takes my breath away if only I could have that love again even if it were just for a day I plead and pray but to no avail it seems this void will remain...... an ever growing deep despair clutching and pulling away, away from the deep dark cloud but its slowly engulfing me I want to make it stop fighting, kicking, clawing its no use its so strong it takes me I feel all alone stop just one day is all I ask take me back to love before it was lost |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
I really like this poem because it is so lifelike and so truthfull...i hope that u find someother love to hold on to...looking forward to reading more of your works  ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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Justman New Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 1 |
This is really good. Look forward to more of your work.  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Charamyst this is beautiful! I guess we've all been in that spot! Sure hurts. Expressed so well. Welcome to Passions! ------------------ Denise |
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freespiritfem Junior Member
since 1999-10-07
Posts 49Cordova,Alabama,USA |
Charamyst....i felt all of your emotions....some advice_I was feeling the same way... as you expressed in this poem...and when i felt ALL HOPE WAS GONE....and i would never feel the "deep desire and passion", that I had once experienced...let me tell ya...it snuck up on me and bit me on the Ass!!!..So..please dont Give UP...when you least excpet it...it will find you...maybe even from the one wrote this about...and if not...there will be Someone else!!! I send "YOU' this BIG_O_CYBER_HUGG!! And this agin was a very intense and expressive poem....Welcome too "Passion"s"..I haven't been here long...but I can tell you there are some really GREAT and Caring People here!!!! Looking forward to more of your work!!! HUGGS!!!! ------------------ Paula Diane S. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I completely understand this, Charamyst. This is moving work, and I'm glad you've come to passions! I'll look for more! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charamyst, Enjoyed the read and welcome to passions. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Know the feeling well.Nicely done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
How sad - but expressed so well. Echoing welcomes - I hope you find comfort here. |
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charamyst New Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 6 |
Thanks everyone for your encouraging words and greetings. Its has been a long time since I have tried to express feelings, emotions, ideas, et into words. Reading other peoples work and knowing I dont have to be perfect here helps me to open up more. Hope to post again soon. Huggs to all. Laurie |
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