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My angel

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Punk
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0 posted 10-27-1999 05:51 PM       View Profile for Punk   Email Punk   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Punk

Your heart should hold me in its arms,
Your heart should hold me tight.
I have found the love that so perfect for me but seems so out of sight.

A distance away from what is so true,
From all that i want to know.
I want to know whats inside of you,
I want to hold you and never let go.

You seem like an angel thats sent from above,
To rescue from this impossible life.
A life thats impossible without ur love,
A life thats impossible without your guiding light.

So come now almighty angel and take me away from this place!
Hold me close to you,
Please keep me safe.

Safe from whatever lies ahead,
Safe from the hurt that i dread.
So come my angel, come, and rescue me from this place.
© Copyright 1999 Punk - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-27-1999 05:54 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

A sweet expression of longing. Welcome to Passions, Punk!
Isis
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2 posted 10-27-1999 06:01 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Welcome to passions Punk! LOVE the untold longing in this piece

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How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool?
~Isis~
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Munda
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3 posted 10-27-1999 06:39 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

So full of feeling, I enjoyed it very much and yes, welcome to Passions ! : )
starboards
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4 posted 10-27-1999 07:37 PM       View Profile for starboards   Email starboards   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starboards

This seems really heartfelt, good job!

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"
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5 posted 10-27-1999 09:25 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Very heartfelt and full of emotion, Punk..you're a welcome addition to our Passions family!

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller


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6 posted 10-27-1999 11:56 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Touching and heartfelt! Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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