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Iloveit
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0 posted 10-27-1999 02:40 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Iloveit

"sweetness"

when they made the word
they had you in mind,
you sprinkle my world
with sunshine and smiles
with hugs and smooches

you temper my mind with
questions, quiet ideas, waiting
patiently for me to figure out
my own answers
never judging, always accepting
how did I exist without you?

you sweeten my world,
the thought of you
tastes good in my mind
how did I, with all my weakness
deserve a friend as sweet as you…


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Watcher666
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1 posted 10-27-1999 02:51 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Lovely!

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Toerag
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2 posted 10-27-1999 02:54 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Granny...thank you dear...I do try! Oh, wait, ya mean this was directed to someone else?...Okay, never mind....but Iloveit when you're so vulnerable! So? what color panties are ya wearing today?...Or, are you wearing any at all?....

Nice job my dear one and only...you really have become quite a poet yanno?
Verma
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3 posted 10-27-1999 02:56 PM       View Profile for Verma   Email Verma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Verma

Ditto " "
Iloveit
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4 posted 10-27-1999 03:02 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

thanks watcher and verma

and toe??? thank you cutie, you know a compliment from you is a compliment I treasure and dang if I'd known you were gonna ask me what color they were I'd of worn some *g*
Pepper
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5 posted 10-27-1999 03:10 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

A truly lovely tribute to your friend.
Enjoyed this much Iloveit.......

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6 posted 10-27-1999 04:14 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Ya mean this poem's not about Toe??? (puzzled look) It sure coulda been! *G* (But then I'd have had to use my baseball bat... but then, I'm gonna have to use that anyway after those panties remarks. *EG*)

Great job, Lovey... I like this one much! *G*
RainbowGirl
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7 posted 10-27-1999 04:29 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Iloveit: ..This is lovely..

HUSG

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Iloveit
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8 posted 10-27-1999 04:35 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

yep pepper I am lucky to have good friends...glad you liked the poem about this one, he is special for sure

lol@not about toe, yep, sure coulda been, and
now you just keep that bat in its holster, everyone here knows how sweet he is *G* so that can't get me in trouble....can it?

and sheesh, you didn't tell me you could read italics *G* thank you my friend

thank you rainbow girl, hugs back
hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 10-27-1999 06:38 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very nice
Denise
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10 posted 10-27-1999 10:22 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very sweet, lloveit! I enjoyed this!

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Denise
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aw...that's sweet!
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