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brandondinsmore
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since 10-27-1999
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0 posted 10-27-1999 12:31 PM       View Profile for brandondinsmore   Email brandondinsmore   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for brandondinsmore

A Queen
Regal
In a sable barn
Not in her true place,
but in a true place, nonetheless
........

Someone interested in my "on-the-spot" poem?
PLEASE! Talk to me. I can't find anyone interested in my poetry, they say it's too different.

Lovingly,
Brandon Dinsmore
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Watcher666
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1 posted 10-27-1999 01:54 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

And what is wrong with different? Liked this one.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 10-27-1999 06:41 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

short, sweet, and not a wasted word amoung them
starboards
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since 10-14-1999
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3 posted 10-27-1999 07:35 PM       View Profile for starboards   Email starboards   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starboards

I love this poem! It speaks of great things in only 5 lines! I myself "try" to write the same types of poems but i get stuck with the "typical format" but inspite of what other people think...I LOVED IT!!! keep it up!
devina
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since 10-28-1999
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4 posted 10-28-1999 12:37 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

YOUR POEM IS EASY TO UNDERSTAND, BUT NEEDS MORE DETAILS. I CAN STILL RELATE.
 
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