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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Life is You... Me... Them... Embrace it all! and Rejoice! 27 October, 1999 ©KRJ ------------------ Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Nice sentiments Sunshine.... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
So much said in so few words.Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah, well stated in a few words....embrace life, seize the day and make it yours  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Have to echo Dsnyder's |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Very good Sunshine...there should be an "us" in there for you somewhere, though. ------------------ Michael Anderson Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? |
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starchild Member
since 1999-10-22
Posts 59manchester, england |
glad you didn't try to write a nice length poem with six verses of four lines with an a,b,a,b rhyme scheme. this is good, new |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Pepper, my support, thanks! Watcher, few words...well... Hoot - seize everything! denise and severn {~,^} michael, now you mean I have to go back and edit it? LOL starchild, thanks for reading...a lot of us try different formats all the time, keep reading and enjoying. Thanks to all of you for coming in and sharing your thoughts. ------------------ Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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