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Another man in your eye...

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Verma
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since 10-25-1999
Posts 80
Midlands, England


0 posted 10-27-1999 11:26 AM       View Profile for Verma   Email Verma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Verma


Another man in your eye.

Those feelings you gave,
Right now I crave,
Your love I suppose,
Like a book, has closed.
My heart, it bangs,
So slow I'm damned,
Your face I see,
It fills me with glee.
Then you walk by,
Another man in your eye,
What can I do,
To not lose you.

Right now I need,
Your love so, indeed,
Please don't go,
I love you so,
I need you to stay,
With me, night and day.
The hurt thats caused,
Brings my life to a pause
I beg of you, my darling please,
Do not go, do not leave….
© Copyright 1999 Steve Verma - All Rights Reserved
Marilyn
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since 09-26-1999
Posts 2646
Ontario, Canada


1 posted 10-27-1999 11:29 AM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

This was well written. As for the theme of the poem, I have just this to say. anyone that would have another in their eye does not deserve to have you. Be sure that if there is another, once that one is gone, someone else will fill the space. Know that you are worth so much more then that.
Watcher666
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since 10-13-1999
Posts 1630


2 posted 10-27-1999 01:48 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Well done.Liked this much.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Verma
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since 10-25-1999
Posts 80
Midlands, England


3 posted 10-27-1999 06:42 PM       View Profile for Verma   Email Verma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Verma

Marilyn - Thank you...i believe that there is more to want we want, than what we really think....don't you?

Watcher - I have read a few of yours and i respect your words - thank you

hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


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Very heart felt sentiments.....I like this one
passing shadows
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