Glen Hope, PA USA
I have to start by saying, when I come across a poem done in caps...I usually can't even bare to read it. On the net, caps stand for shouting. Let your words shout for themselves in the future. This poem has a lot to say, but the caps are a definate destraction from it. I can see a few areas that the flow could be smoothed up a bit and there are a few typos or misspellings, but other than that, it's got a good message and with a bit of work could be an excellent poem.