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the spawning of the weasel

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starchild
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since 10-22-1999
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0 posted 10-27-1999 07:38 AM       View Profile for starchild   Email starchild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starchild

the weasel family gathered round,
the ground.
but there was not a sound,
all around.

grrr the weasel said and cried,
and died.
her body lay right by his side,
but no one spied,
her.
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Ohme
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1 posted 10-27-1999 07:47 AM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

That you would note the passing of a weasel, I think you must be quite observant and look upon the small things as still important. Nice, I enjoyed it.
Scarlet pimpernel
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Some how I don't think that he actually saw the weasel, did you Starchild? I have never known anyone who has seen a weasel cry and then die. I think he may have been talking about something else.
starchild
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3 posted 10-27-1999 08:41 AM       View Profile for starchild   Email starchild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starchild

i didn't actually see the weasel but the poem was about the death of rotundo the best clown in the west
Watcher666
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Nicely done.

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