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goodbye daddy i love you

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amber
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0 posted 10-27-1999 02:44 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber

you visit me from time to time,
to assure me your still there,
lost above the clouds in heaven,
still ive found you somwhere.

in my dreams you know me,
your beautiful little duaghter,
youve missed out on so many years,
and regretfully there over.

you watch over me i know,
becasue i feel you in the night,
not to say it doesnt scare me,
but somehow it just feels right.

you hold me like a child,
and wash away my insecurities,
with jsut the wishper of your voice,
its funny how you seem to know me.

your my daddy, that i gave up on,
becasue i could never have you back,
i talked to you all through the night,
though you seldom answered back.

you said what needed saying,
and told me what i must do,
thank you for looking out for us,
daddy, goodbye i love you.

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you want me to trust you with my heart, when i cant even trust myself not to let you break it.
© Copyright 1999 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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1 posted 10-27-1999 03:18 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Lovely.....liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
RSEvans
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since 10-23-1999
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Tulsa, OK, USA


2 posted 10-27-1999 06:37 AM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

My father passed away last November and with the day coming around again I hope that I can pay tribute to him so eloquently. Truly a heartfelt piece.

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No matter where you go, somebody's probably already been there and gotten the parking space...
Ohme
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3 posted 10-27-1999 07:31 AM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Beautiful, Amber.
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