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just confused and half crazy i suppose

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amber
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los banos, ca,


0 posted 10-27-1999 02:38 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber

i wonder if your an angel,
that hasnt quite found its place,
coming to comfort me now,
with a long lost fathers grace.

its been such a long time,
so i welcome you in my dreams,
but the things you say hurt me so,
because i understand what they mean.

i know that you watch over us,
my family, my sister and i,
your sorry about the past,
and that you left your baby duaghters behind.

you dont speak about your death,
or maybe i just block it out,
because i dont want to know,
why your here, and what its all about.

ive heard of guardian angels,
and i believe your mine,
because youve chose to comfort me,
after all this absent time.
© Copyright 1999 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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1 posted 10-27-1999 02:41 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Sad and touching! Nicely done.

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PhaerieChild
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2 posted 10-27-1999 03:42 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Amber, this is very well written...even though sad it has a poignant hope to it.

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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


3 posted 10-27-1999 04:19 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Wow Amber... this calls out with a hope and saddness that are palpable!
Well done on expressing yourself!
Ohme
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4 posted 10-27-1999 05:54 AM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

I like this, Amber
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 10-27-1999 08:46 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

SO sad
 
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