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Open Poetry #3

Repeat After Me....

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-10-27 02:07 AM

its too hard
its too tough
i mean what i say
i speak not enough
its what you have
not what you dont
repeat after me..
it might lessen your load
if your but living
without having to be told..

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Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-10-27 02:26 AM

'its what you have ...not want you don't' more truer words have not been spoken. Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Julie
Senior Member

since 1999-08-20

Posts 739
Houston, TX

2 posted 1999-10-28 08:47 PM

I liked the verse Watcher mentioned but liked you last line (as usual) "without being told. So back to the top...

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