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The Jackal
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0 posted 10-27-1999 02:07 AM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

its too hard
its too tough
i mean what i say
i speak not enough
its what you have
not what you dont
repeat after me..
it might lessen your load
if your but living
without having to be told..




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Watcher666
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1 posted 10-27-1999 02:26 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

'its what you have ...not want you don't' more truer words have not been spoken. Well done!

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Julie
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2 posted 10-28-1999 08:47 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

I liked the verse Watcher mentioned but liked you last line (as usual) "without being told. So back to the top...
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