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** Baby Angel Girl **

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poetFemmeFatale
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0 posted 10-27-1999 12:30 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Once upon a time - -
there lived a tiny soul
she blossomed like a star
her presence made me whole.
To know she grew inside
my deepest inner core
to keep her safe & warm
forever, this I swore.
3 months came & went
was August twenty-eight
her tiny heart was still
by then, it was too late.
The doctor rushed me in
and did a sonogram
on the screen I saw her -
my precious little lamb...
She lay so very still
as if she were asleep
I wanted her to move
my heart began to weep.
The doctor shook his head
he said, "Your baby's gone"...
"We'll have to take her now -
this won't take very long."
I held my belly tight
I wanted her to stay
"Please don't take her from me."
Is all that I could say.
When I came to - that night
I knew that she was gone
I couldn't keep her warm
I wondered what went wrong?
I cried & cried & cried -
& asked my Saviour why
my precious little lamb
had to go and die?
The timing wasn't right
she knew she had to go -
she has a place in Heaven
where she can play & grow.
I'm sure that there's an angel
who keeps her safe & sound
I know she knows I love her -
I feel her all around.
My baby angel girl
Now has her tiny wings...
She waits for me in Heaven
and while she waits - she sings.........

~~ To my Baby Angel Girl...Laisha Denea...



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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale

© Copyright 1999 Gennifer David - All Rights Reserved
amber
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1 posted 10-27-1999 12:35 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

this is such a beautiful poem, and i know what strength it must have taken to write it. i wish you all the warmth in the world, but know that no words can bring that to you. i hold you in my thoughts, and im am very sorry for you. agian, a beautiful poem, they always are when you put your entire heart into them.
Michael
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2 posted 10-27-1999 12:49 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

And you shall be with her in heaven, Dear, don't ever doubt that. This is so sad, I wish I could just reach out and hold you right now. My heart is with you...wonderful, wonderful poem.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?


Watcher666
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3 posted 10-27-1999 01:21 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Loving Tribute to one here for so short a time *Hugs*

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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4 posted 10-27-1999 04:28 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

WoW!
This is terrible, tragic, beautiful and alost made me cry! I feel for you G... no one should have to deal with so much pain. I am awed by your grace and strength in looking at the "bright" side of this loss.
A heart wrencher friend.
DreamEvil
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5 posted 10-27-1999 05:38 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I must thank you dear Lady for penning something able to wrench emotion from me this night. I would have preferred something pleasant, but this feels more like home than joy could have. This is a wonderfully woven slice of soul that speaks volumes of how knowing you can enrich the lives of those who name you a friend and those you name as friends yourself.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ

Ohme
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6 posted 10-27-1999 05:39 AM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme


I'm glad that you could take a sad event and give it hope . Very pretty poem, Femme
RSEvans
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7 posted 10-27-1999 06:16 AM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

I know there are things we have never talked about and possibly never will, Gennifer. But thank you for sharing this piece. It brought a tear to my eye. I can only hope that when I find the strength to write about my Dad that it will be as well put. You have my ear and my shoulder, Sis.

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No matter where you go, somebody's probably already been there and gotten the parking space...
JennyLee
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8 posted 10-27-1999 07:30 AM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Gennifer,Your sweet little Angel sings to a choir of larger angels,and you will meet again in Heaven. Bless you.

Jenny
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9 posted 10-27-1999 08:35 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Gennifer...what a wonderful tribute to your daughter. This is so tragic and so touching. Your angel waits for you and some day you shall hold her in your arms
Severn
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10 posted 10-28-1999 03:08 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Simple hugs here, my friend.
Michael
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11 posted 10-28-1999 06:52 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Femme, thank you for talking with me about this last night. I am so glad you are able now to speak of the hurts you harbored so long. I love you, and i'm holding you in my thoughts and prayers.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?


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12 posted 11-01-1999 11:36 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

PFF, this was a truly beautiful, heartbreaking poem. I'm so sorry to hear about your daughter.

Hugs,

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."

WhtDove
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13 posted 11-01-1999 03:11 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Femme this was so beautifully written! I'm really sorry to hear of your loss. I know it must be really hard. Some are just to good to go through this world. She was one of them. God Bless you, I hope you heal from this tragedy. I know you will it will take time. Rest assured you will see her again.
Sunshine
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14 posted 11-01-1999 04:55 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

The angels that watch over your daughter will help heal you also. Blessings.
Isis
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15 posted 11-01-1999 05:21 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

So sad to endure. No pain is greater than losing a child. You will see her again, and now when you need her, just listen to hear her sing. Beautifully and sad piece. (HUGS) from across the sea, one mother to another...

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


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