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Verma
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since 1999-10-25
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0 posted 1999-10-26 01:43 PM




HURT


When we walked side by side, there was a feeling I knew which felt like gold
Now I'm alone & you seem to hide, my heart feels hurt, bitter & cold
The pain & anguish which I hold deep within
Will last forever, for my pain and my sin.

No matter what I try to say or do,
Everything around me seems dreary & blue
Your life to me was more important than mine,
Now I know my life is a waste of time.

There is a great big hole that fills my day,
Caused by the things that I need you to say.
The time I loved and needed so much,
Is a long time gone along with your touch.

There was a time I knew when my heart would glow,
That feeling has gone, for good now I know…..

© Copyright 1999 Steve Verma - All Rights Reserved
suthern
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1 posted 1999-10-26 02:46 PM


I hope that glow comes again... welcome!
Watcher666
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2 posted 1999-10-26 05:01 PM


Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Verma
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3 posted 1999-10-26 07:46 PM


Watcher - Thanx

Suthern - I hope so too~~

Denise
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4 posted 1999-10-26 09:59 PM


This is so sad

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Denise

Ohme
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5 posted 1999-10-26 10:50 PM



Very sad indeed!

Marilyn
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6 posted 1999-10-26 11:08 PM


I know well of what you speak. Welcome to Passions. one thing you need to know is this. NEVER let anyone be your life. You can survive without any male or female in your life. Be happy with who you are and if love comes again, bonus!
hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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7 posted 1999-10-27 09:01 AM


Never think that the feeling is gone forever. They can only take from us what we allow them to. Stand up and say, "no more..no more will you take my life." May God bless
Verma
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8 posted 1999-10-27 10:31 AM


Marilyn & Hoot owl

I thank you both for your kind words...

seti@home
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9 posted 2000-03-16 12:22 PM


very sad, but your over it now Steve!
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