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Verma
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0 posted 10-26-1999 01:43 PM       View Profile for Verma   Email Verma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Verma



HURT


When we walked side by side, there was a feeling I knew which felt like gold
Now I'm alone & you seem to hide, my heart feels hurt, bitter & cold
The pain & anguish which I hold deep within
Will last forever, for my pain and my sin.

No matter what I try to say or do,
Everything around me seems dreary & blue
Your life to me was more important than mine,
Now I know my life is a waste of time.

There is a great big hole that fills my day,
Caused by the things that I need you to say.
The time I loved and needed so much,
Is a long time gone along with your touch.

There was a time I knew when my heart would glow,
That feeling has gone, for good now I know…..
© Copyright 1999 Steve Verma - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-26-1999 02:46 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I hope that glow comes again... welcome!
Watcher666
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Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Verma
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Watcher - Thanx

Suthern - I hope so too~~
Denise
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4 posted 10-26-1999 09:59 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so sad

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Denise
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Very sad indeed!
Marilyn
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I know well of what you speak. Welcome to Passions. one thing you need to know is this. NEVER let anyone be your life. You can survive without any male or female in your life. Be happy with who you are and if love comes again, bonus!
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Never think that the feeling is gone forever. They can only take from us what we allow them to. Stand up and say, "no more..no more will you take my life." May God bless
Verma
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8 posted 10-27-1999 10:31 AM       View Profile for Verma   Email Verma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Verma

Marilyn & Hoot owl

I thank you both for your kind words...
seti@home
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very sad, but your over it now Steve!
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