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Ohme
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since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

0 posted 1999-10-26 01:30 PM

When I imagined Love

When I wished for someone to speak softly in my ear
and say such lovely words my heart would quake.
I imagined someone with such resonance of voice
not hearing them would only make my heart break.

Then I imagined words with soft melodic sounds
reverberating gently through my ear.
So when I closed my eyes awaiting symphony
the grandure of it I began to hear.

From far away I heard approaching violins
with their rapport expressed in harmony.
The baritone reply, then came from vibrant cellos.
And how imagined music sang to me!

There I spent my time in wondrous rapture,
thinking, no more perfect could it be
until I turned my head and then with open eyes
I listened to the words you said to me.

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 1999-10-26 01:37 PM

Oh my! ohme. Very romantic...a wonderful metaphor.

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

2 posted 1999-10-26 01:40 PM

I'm on ditto duty....this is beautiful..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Verma
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since 1999-10-25

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Midlands, England

3 posted 1999-10-26 01:53 PM

Nice.....very nice !

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 1999-10-26 02:44 PM

Bravo!!! It's not the romantic words that stir the soul... it's the beloved voice which utters them!

Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

5 posted 1999-10-26 04:59 PM

This is beautiful! Enjoyed the read!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

caroline
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since 1999-08-16

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http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm

6 posted 1999-10-26 05:23 PM

So very lovely

So many things can become music to us. This is excellent!

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

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7 posted 1999-10-26 08:43 PM

Beautiful!

(and you make a smiley face by using the colon key and the right parentheses (I think it's called that!) this one- ) !

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Denise

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 10-26-1999).]

tori
Senior Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA

8 posted 1999-10-26 08:46 PM

Ohme this was so gentle and romantic.. very good visual too....

Ohme
Senior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

9 posted 1999-10-26 08:58 PM

Thanks for your remarks. Now if I am good at following instructions

Thanks, Denise

[This message has been edited by Ohme (edited 10-26-1999).]

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

10 posted 1999-10-27 09:12 AM

Bravo!! Well written Ohme

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