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When I Imagined Love

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Ohme
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0 posted 10-26-1999 01:30 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Ohme

When I imagined Love

When I wished for someone to speak softly in my ear
and say such lovely words my heart would quake.
I imagined someone with such resonance of voice
not hearing them would only make my heart break.

Then I imagined words with soft melodic sounds
reverberating gently through my ear.
So when I closed my eyes awaiting symphony
the grandure of it I began to hear.

From far away I heard approaching violins
with their rapport expressed in harmony.
The baritone reply, then came from vibrant cellos.
And how imagined music sang to me!

There I spent my time in wondrous rapture,
thinking, no more perfect could it be
until I turned my head and then with open eyes
I listened to the words you said to me.
© Copyright 1999 Lorene Meadows - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-26-1999 01:37 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Oh my! ohme. Very romantic...a wonderful metaphor.
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2 posted 10-26-1999 01:40 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

I'm on ditto duty....this is beautiful..

HUGS

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3 posted 10-26-1999 01:53 PM       View Profile for Verma   Email Verma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Verma

Nice.....very nice !
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4 posted 10-26-1999 02:44 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Bravo!!! It's not the romantic words that stir the soul... it's the beloved voice which utters them!
Watcher666
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5 posted 10-26-1999 04:59 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

This is beautiful! Enjoyed the read!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
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6 posted 10-26-1999 05:23 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

So very lovely So many things can become music to us. This is excellent!

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

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7 posted 10-26-1999 08:43 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful! (and you make a smiley face by using the colon key and the right parentheses (I think it's called that!) this one- ) !

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[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 10-26-1999).]
tori
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8 posted 10-26-1999 08:46 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Ohme this was so gentle and romantic.. very good visual too....
Ohme
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9 posted 10-26-1999 08:58 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Thanks for your remarks. Now if I am good at following instructions

Thanks, Denise

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hoot_owl_rn
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10 posted 10-27-1999 09:12 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Bravo!! Well written Ohme
 
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