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You Never Will Know Pain

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Ohme
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0 posted 10-26-1999 12:26 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Ohme

You Never Will Know Pain

You will never know the pain
a grieving heart can feel,
for you are never saddened
never have a wound to heal.
You can't feel compassion,
all emotion is unknown.
A seed of friendship planted
you destroy before it's grown.
Unconcerned for others,
there's no love that you would feed.
To live your life so shallow
it assures your every need.
Life will never do you harm.
You never will know pain,
for there is nothing you can lose.
But nothing will you gain.
© Copyright 1999 Lorene Meadows - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 10-26-1999 12:30 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Ohme,
Like it much, good read.
Julie
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2 posted 10-26-1999 12:32 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Ohme...this one really spoke to me. Thank you for sharing ... Could feel the sadness in it.
Watcher666
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3 posted 10-26-1999 01:15 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Cold,shallow people.....know them well.Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Andrew Scott
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4 posted 10-26-1999 07:06 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Ohme: I see I'll have to keep an eye out for your material as I've enjoyed what few I've read. One word for this one: machine. Thanks for sharing.
Munda
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5 posted 10-26-1999 07:22 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Aren't they sad, people like that. They miss so much of life. Thanks for sharing this.
Verma
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6 posted 10-26-1999 07:27 PM       View Profile for Verma   Email Verma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Verma

Why do people do what they do ???...it makes think - thanks
Ohme
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7 posted 10-26-1999 08:32 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Thanks Seymour, for reading and replying.

Julie, Watcher, it is sad, do not understand why some people limit their life to so little.

Thanks Andrew. I have already been watching for your work! I enjoy it too.

Thanks, Munda, Verma. Sad thing is they don't know what they are missing!

Thanks all of you for your comments.


[This message has been edited by Ohme (edited 10-26-1999).]
Denise
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8 posted 10-26-1999 08:47 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very good, Ohme!

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Denise
Michael
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9 posted 10-27-1999 01:19 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Maybe not pain, but most assuredly loneliness would find such a person. Very good poem, Ohme, I know some narcistics myself.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?


tori
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10 posted 10-27-1999 01:52 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Ohme.. I wish I had writen these words.. I've been thinking them all week long..lol guess there is one in every crowd...

Wonderful words and right on time.. lol
DreamEvil
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11 posted 10-27-1999 06:31 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Very well done indeed my friend. This piece likes me it does.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ

hoot_owl_rn
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12 posted 10-27-1999 08:37 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Ohme...what a wonderful post. I really enjoyed this piece
tori
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13 posted 10-27-1999 11:53 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Had to put ya back on First.. I just love it.
Toerag
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14 posted 10-27-1999 11:55 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Yep....I'm puttin you back on top too....(I like the gals on top yanno?).....Great job.
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15 posted 10-27-1999 12:11 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Great poem, Ohme! Well done!
passing shadows
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16 posted 05-16-2004 07:58 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I think we all know someone like this
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