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Meaning of love

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vandana
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Show me what love has got to do with,
Show me all the love love you've,
Show me the meaning of love,
Do you really know what love is,
Can you live with this love
You've got inside your heart ?
Can you give what you 've?
Will you agree when I say I love you?
Will you marry me?
When we're in love?
Will you show me
What your feelings are about?
Don't ask me why I 'm
Saying all this to you,
Will you still love me?
Do you understand
What love is?
Show the meaning of love,
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OK, I must add a bit of constructive criticism here.....

"Love" is one of the most over-used words in poetry...Everyone probably uses it sometimes, but this is too much to take. Try a few adjectives, or some metaphors. Just a suggestion.

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