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Christopher
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0 posted 10-26-1999 03:36 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Christopher

For Comfort


Crystal tears echo deep longing
Ache I only to hold thee near.
Hold in mine heart bright joy you bring,
So to dispel all doubt and fear.

"Someday soon." Joint begging behest.
Wailed plaintive plea for sweet surcease.
Know thee always, I try my best,
To hail thy voice with mine in peace.

Yet for the non, ‘tis nought to do,
But hold thee close inside my mind;
Feel thy soul sparkle mine anew...
With whispered love which shall not bind.

So ‘cross this world and seven seas,
On fair snow-white wings of bright dove.
I beg the winds to bear mine pleas,
To touch thine heart with all my love.



[This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 10-26-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 C.G. Ward - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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1 posted 10-26-1999 03:38 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Very well crafted piece Christopher and I think your message will be heard loud and clear.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

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2 posted 10-26-1999 03:41 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Beautifully done Wolf Pup!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Nan
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3 posted 10-26-1999 07:34 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Methinks the man is smitten...
Michael
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4 posted 10-26-1999 08:25 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Smitten, Indeed...
Very well done, Chris, as always.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?


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5 posted 10-26-1999 08:47 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Lovely Chris! Has the feeling of a prayer.......

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!
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6 posted 10-26-1999 09:49 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Chris!

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Denise
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7 posted 10-27-1999 09:09 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh, can I ever relate. Nicely written
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8 posted 10-27-1999 09:17 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Well done Chris! yanno?, I know some rednecks back home that if they heard this recited they'd think you were from one of them firrin countries!!!
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9 posted 10-27-1999 09:38 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Chris...this is really really warm, sensual, yet so sad and beautiful rolled all up into one! Wow what a lovely cry for her...you are smitten, boy - - I can't wait to see how she replies...

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale

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How lovely...one thought comes to my mind....AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! Now if only I could get my sweety to write such verses for me.....

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
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well amy, I can one up you there, first I need a sweetie, then I will work on being the inspiration for such beautiful poetry, great job Chris, can feel this one deep within
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Hello again Chris. Could it be you are even more smitten then you were before I went on hols?? Lovely piece

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How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool?
~Isis~
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13 posted 10-28-1999 12:42 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

And crystal tears I do return and my heart is so touched, I can hardly feel anything else.
Sigh, my poet, prose, novel man - this is so beautiful.
Christopher
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14 posted 10-30-1999 06:19 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Dream- I can only hope 'tis the case...sometimes, I fear teh distance dims the thoughts.

Lurker- Merci!

Nan- Smitten I am, and may the smittening never cease!

Michael- Thank you sir, I have a feeling you know of this as well!

Pepper- sorry

Ruth- I know you can!

Toe- LOL...firrin huh? Well, the lady I'm smiten with is firrin, does that count?

G- She has, and a beautiful reply it is, thank you!

Amy- (just beat 'im up and make him!!!)

iloveit- I'm sure you've provided your share of inspiration!!!

Isis smittener and smittener every day!

K- I am glad you can feel my touch. I am ever frustrated at my seeming inability to express the feelings deep inside...a bad thing to have a problem with when your life is expressed through words, but 'tis the effect you have on me.

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15 posted 10-30-1999 06:35 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Stunning, Christopher...oh so excellent. The third stanza is a little work of art in itself

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

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