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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration 
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Crystal tears echo deep longing Ache I only to hold thee near. Hold in mine heart bright joy you bring, So to dispel all doubt and fear. "Someday soon." Joint begging behest. Wailed plaintive plea for sweet surcease. Know thee always, I try my best, To hail thy voice with mine in peace. Yet for the non, ‘tis nought to do, But hold thee close inside my mind; Feel thy soul sparkle mine anew... With whispered love which shall not bind. So ‘cross this world and seven seas, On fair snow-white wings of bright dove. I beg the winds to bear mine pleas, To touch thine heart with all my love. [This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 10-26-1999).] |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Very well crafted piece Christopher and I think your message will be heard loud and clear. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Beautifully done Wolf Pup! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Methinks the man is smitten...  |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Smitten, Indeed... Very well done, Chris, as always. ------------------ Michael Anderson Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Lovely Chris! Has the feeling of a prayer....... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Chris! ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh, can I ever relate. Nicely written |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Well done Chris! yanno?, I know some rednecks back home that if they heard this recited they'd think you were from one of them firrin countries!!! |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Chris...this is really really warm, sensual, yet so sad and beautiful rolled all up into one! Wow what a lovely cry for her...you are smitten, boy - - I can't wait to see how she replies... ------------------ ~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
How lovely...one thought comes to my mind....AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! Now if only I could get my sweety to write such verses for me..... ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
well amy, I can one up you there, first I need a sweetie, then I will work on being the inspiration for such beautiful poetry, great job Chris, can feel this one deep within |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Hello again Chris. Could it be you are even more smitten then you were before I went on hols?? Lovely piece ------------------ How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool? ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
And crystal tears I do return and my heart is so touched, I can hardly feel anything else. Sigh, my poet, prose, novel man - this is so beautiful. |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Dream- I can only hope 'tis the case...sometimes, I fear teh distance dims the thoughts. Lurker- Merci! Nan- Smitten I am, and may the smittening never cease! Michael- Thank you sir, I have a feeling you know of this as well! Pepper- sorry Ruth- I know you can! Toe- LOL...firrin huh? Well, the lady I'm smiten with is firrin, does that count? G- She has, and a beautiful reply it is, thank you! Amy- (just beat 'im up and make him!!!)  iloveit- I'm sure you've provided your share of inspiration!!! Isis smittener and smittener every day! K- I am glad you can feel my touch. I am ever frustrated at my seeming inability to express the feelings deep inside...a bad thing to have a problem with when your life is expressed through words, but 'tis the effect you have on me. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Stunning, Christopher...oh so excellent. The third stanza is a little work of art in itself ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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