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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 10-26-1999 03:35 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for wayoutwalt

im sittin way off in the corner
writin verse on my ankle skin
im hidin from humanity
dont know if ill be back agin

i stole a coat hangar from my straght jacket
yeah they hang those things some how
theres a bloody mess in the corner
and my ankle aint so white right now

im standing next to the padding
carving verse rather madening
i know that didnt ryhme but i dont care
after all im just droolin
writin words on the padding
in my longjohn straight jacket underwear
© Copyright 1999 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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1 posted 10-26-1999 03:36 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Cute one walt.

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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


2 posted 10-26-1999 03:37 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

ROFL!!
I'd be scared to go to sleep then!
Watcher666
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3 posted 10-26-1999 03:42 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

LOL.....well done!!!

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Nan
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4 posted 10-26-1999 06:58 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

I'm glad to see you posting, walt - I'm not deleting - nope - not me...
Dark Angel
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5 posted 10-26-1999 07:10 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

hehehe I liked this

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Saxoness
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6 posted 10-26-1999 10:30 AM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

Good one, Walt

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I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


Ohme
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7 posted 10-26-1999 10:34 AM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Walt, even if I could, I would't delete this one. I like it!
tori
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8 posted 10-26-1999 10:40 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Can I ask ya to loan me the jacket Walt?
I have an outfit that it will go with !
doreen peri
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9 posted 10-26-1999 11:58 AM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

Hey Walt! Where've you been? Love this rhyme, for sure! You're not one of those Passions 'stute people are you? Justin Kace you were, I thought I'd ask.

Seriously, this is an interesting poem and I'm glad to see you posting again. Haven't seen you around for a while.
Denise
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10 posted 10-26-1999 10:16 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I needed a laugh! Thank you!

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Denise
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11 posted 10-26-1999 10:19 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Scary thought bout your ankle their! Good one! Now why would ya want to delete this? I dunno! Unique it is!
starchild
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12 posted 10-27-1999 08:04 AM       View Profile for starchild   Email starchild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starchild

yep yep yep it is raining in there isn't it?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Scarlet pimpernel
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13 posted 10-27-1999 08:39 AM       View Profile for Scarlet pimpernel   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Scarlet pimpernel

Love the title. Its a good one.
 
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