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Pray For me

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tori
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0 posted 10-26-1999 03:08 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

I've not ever questioned you
I've accepted all that I must do
I've never asked the reasons why
I've always learned to let things fly


I'm so sorry for my weak dismay
I'm sorry that I feel this way
As always Lord I want to know
What road to take what seeds to sow
With Your guidance I'll do what's right
I pray to you, this lonely night

But now "My God" I've come to you
I Ask You for Your mercy mild
To lay Your Hands upon Your child
To not forget this one that loves
I pray for your strength and all your love

My body weak , and broken down
My mind is out there, wondering around
My sprits someplace I can't find
My soul is off doing time

Lord I ask you to recharge my soul
This broken dreamers wishful mind
Her heart, that's trying to be kind
To accept the things she does not know
And take the ones, You can't let go

My Lord, My God of all that's right
I pray to you this cold dark night
I come to seek thy tender touch
Just touch my mind Lord, so I may know
This is my field, that I must sow

Guide me with your Mighty hands
So I may wake to understand
And when my fight is nearly done
Let my voice cry your name, to everyone
It is in Your name, I ask of You
My God, for whom my love is true

Amen.
Thanks be to God

TORI 99

© Copyright 1999 Victoria Hosier/tori - All Rights Reserved
ThUnDeRkYsS
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1 posted 10-26-1999 03:25 AM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

This is wonderful!! I am at a loss for words right now... Absolutely outstanding

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be
DreamEvil
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2 posted 10-26-1999 03:35 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

This is a simply wonderful piece, Tori.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ

Watcher666
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3 posted 10-26-1999 03:44 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Beautiful work here.Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
wayoutwalt
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4 posted 10-26-1999 03:48 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

it is a great example of prayer there is true hope in prayer and in verse i like reading psalms yuh did a fine job tori
tori
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5 posted 10-26-1999 10:35 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Words from the heart..
Thanks to all of you for the kind words... Just pray for me!!
Sunshine
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6 posted 10-26-1999 10:40 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

You've spoken for just about everyone in this piece. Well done.
Ohme
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7 posted 10-26-1999 10:46 AM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme



What else could I say? Amen
WhtDove
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8 posted 10-26-1999 10:55 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Tori you bring tears to my eyes! I'm praying for you-you know that! Your faith seems strong my friend! I pray that it stays with you, it will hold you through these tough times!

I wanted to write something for you here Tori, but the words fail me! I can think of nothing. I know HE's there and watching over you. He hears your crys and he shall hold your hand! God Bless you Tori!
tori
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9 posted 10-26-1999 11:05 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Thank You Sunshine I am gald that you've found something in my prayer that has touched you...
Ohme I agree... and say it so many times in the course of my days..
WhtDov.. I know that place that the words get stuck in..... think we all do but honestly, knowing I'm in your paryers... Does give me a feeling of Peace...and helps keep my faith strong.. Thanks my friend.....you are in mine as well...
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 10-26-1999 11:25 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Tori,
Keep the faith, well done.
Lady in Waiting
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11 posted 10-26-1999 04:09 PM       View Profile for Lady in Waiting   Email Lady in Waiting   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Lady in Waiting

Tori this was so beautiful I can't tell you how it has touched me. Thanks for sharing this one
Toerag
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12 posted 10-26-1999 04:15 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Tori....now I'm sure that at least once you've read one of my pieces of garbage, and I'm sure you've noticed what a deeply religious type'a guy I am...LOL....but this was indeed beautiful.....a job/prayer/poem well done!!!!!!!!!!
Pepper
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13 posted 10-26-1999 04:18 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Beautifully done Tori.
You will be in my prayers.....

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!
tori
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14 posted 10-26-1999 08:27 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Thanks Pepper, Lady and Toerag!!
And Yes Toe... I've read some good stuff there I still laugh when I think of the battle of Toe and Baladeer
Denise
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15 posted 10-26-1999 08:31 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Simply beautiful.

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Denise
hoot_owl_rn
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16 posted 10-26-1999 08:41 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wonderful tori
tori
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17 posted 10-26-1999 11:16 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Thank you so much Ruth and Denise..
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