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tori
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA

0 posted 1999-10-26 12:20 PM


Ok this is for all who said my poetry was getting to sad.....lol
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A yellow bellied One Eyed Willie
Made his way to Pick-a-Dilly
With much joy to his surprise
He met there many other One Eyed guy's
Who told of mystic journey's had
Even told some times of sad
For weeks and months they told their tales
How those yellow bellied One Eye's whaled
They laughed and hooted with no end
With their yellow bellied One Eyed friends

So if you come to Pick-a-Dilly don't be shocked
By the One Eyed Willies
Just get your rest before you come
With One Eyed Willies there wont be none
They hoot and holler through the night
A One Eyed Willie paradise~
They will laugh all night and make you silly
When you hang out with One Eyed Willie's

Tori 99
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If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one dropof ink
vlh.

© Copyright 1999 Victoria Hosier/tori - All Rights Reserved
thursdayschild
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since 1999-07-01
Posts 169
Houston, Tx.
1 posted 1999-10-26 12:23 PM


Cute! Thanks for the laugh!
wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
2 posted 1999-10-26 12:24 PM


ok gettin lil excited here YOU MEAN THEY STILL GOT PICADILLYS they left my part o texas when i was a kid o the purple jello where do you live send me a plane ticket and a gift certificate!!! good stuff tori !
tori
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA
3 posted 1999-10-26 02:42 AM


thanks thrusday!!
Ok Walt. the GC is on the way.. but the plane ticket well bud... ya gona have to spring for it.... lol

Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

4 posted 1999-10-26 04:02 AM


Liked this much!! Too cute!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

tori
Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA
5 posted 1999-10-26 10:29 AM


Thanks Watcher, Glad you enjoyed!!
Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 816
Texas
6 posted 1999-10-26 10:50 AM



Got a giggle out of this one. Thanks, it is cute.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
7 posted 1999-10-26 11:09 AM


Tori this was great, and humurous! But had I known what I know now, I wouldn't have said that about being so sad! HUGS

Great one!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
8 posted 1999-10-26 11:13 AM


Tori,
Enjoyed the humor, well done.

tori
Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA
9 posted 1999-10-26 11:15 AM


Happy I could get a giggle Ohme...!!
WhtDove... Don't think like that.. otherwise I may have held it inside.. and I think I would be about ready to Pop..lol.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
10 posted 1999-10-26 11:20 AM


Ok Tori, we wouldn't want you to do that! Check your email! Love ya!
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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11 posted 1999-10-26 09:08 PM


Hillarious! Thanks for the laugh!

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Denise

tori
Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA
12 posted 1999-10-26 11:13 PM


Glad I could bring a smile Denise!!
Skyfyre
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since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap
13 posted 1999-10-26 11:18 PM


Long live the One-Eyed-Willies!

This one tickled me, though I maintain that I am not ticklish in the least. Well done.

--Kess

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You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.

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