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Perfect Love

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sparrow
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0 posted 10-25-1999 11:07 PM       View Profile for sparrow   Email sparrow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit sparrow's Home Page   View IP for sparrow

Perfect Love

Slivering kindness
momentarily mindless
lost in the rush
of a young man's crush

Withering roses
as old as Moses
the best to be found
in this old poor town

unsuspecting mistress
accepting his kisses
she knew of his existence
because of his persistence

Now they are married
and rich as fairies
hearts pure as gold
they both had broke the mold


This is an old one as well, I've always thought it was kinda goofy, but I always get comments on it for some reason.

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thursdayschild
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1 posted 10-25-1999 11:28 PM       View Profile for thursdayschild   Email thursdayschild   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for thursdayschild

Sweet!
Watcher666
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2 posted 10-26-1999 04:31 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Cute! Nicely done!

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Dark Angel
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This is lovley Sparrow

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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