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Longing For You

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Carolina Girl
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0 posted 10-25-1999 09:59 PM       View Profile for Carolina Girl   Email Carolina Girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Carolina Girl

Fingers outstretched and grasping
Wanting to feel your touch.

Lips moist, waiting and parted
Wanting to taste your kiss.

Eyes open and desperately searching
Wanting to see your soul.

Arms reaching to hold and keep you
Wanting to embrace you for eternity.

Within my head, I hear your heart beating;
My desires grow stronger with every pulse.

Now the love of my life is devastating:
No loving touch, no tender kiss,
No warm embrace or sight of you.

And the only heartbeat that exists,
Is the alarm clock.

Fingers outstretched and grasping
Lips moist, waiting, and parted
Eyes open and desperately searching
Arms reaching to hold
The moment my dreams come true.


I'm trying... my feelings are so strong right now.... bear with me as I search for words and style. *HUGZ*
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1 posted 10-25-1999 10:02 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

You've done well in finding them so far, CG. Beautiful job.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."

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2 posted 10-25-1999 11:17 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Your emotions are very strong here, Carolina Girl. They form their own style and its beautiful.
thursdayschild
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3 posted 10-25-1999 11:58 PM       View Profile for thursdayschild   Email thursdayschild   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for thursdayschild

Really liked this Carolina Girl. Filled with
emotion, lovely work!
Watcher666
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4 posted 10-26-1999 04:26 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

This was lovely.....well done!

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