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Il Suono Di Bellezza (for Balladeer)
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Il Suono Di Bellezza (for Balladeer) |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Il Suono di Bellezza (the sound of beauty) With the sweet breath of an angel the sound pours from his throat A noise so beautiful that life stops to listen… He embraces the quiet of the calm sea and lends it to us to hear, we who don't know it The love of the music comes from within him and he shares it with grace, with nobleness, with powerful images that float off his tongue, so that we may see in our minds what cannot be seen with the eye but what is eternally implanted on his soul I close my eyes, and listen, listen… His words, the sound, the beauty resonates in my senses My dreams ordained to music… Un rumore, il vento lo sveglia ( a noise, the wind awakes me) © caroline 1999 Inspired by the music of Andrea Bocelli ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
And with this, you said it all: "with powerful images that float off his tongue, so that we may see in our minds what cannot be seen with the eye but what is eternally implanted on his soul" Magnificent, beautiful...etc...amazing! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, indeed!  ------------------ Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Absolutely, Caroline. How wonderfully and accurately you have described it. " A noise so beautiful that life stops to listen." Thank you for posting this. A copy goes on my wall. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Applauds this wonderful piece, well done caroline |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
More applause here Caroline!! Your poem is just Wonderful!! ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Liked this much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Caroline, this is beautiful indeed,well done! ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful! |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Beautifully put. An image per line worth a thousand normal words.... ------------------ No matter where you go, somebody's probably already been there and gotten the parking space... |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Well I'm speechless...I know Balladeer feels all warm inside for it certainly touched me. Beautiful imagery...you always do that so well. Encore! Encore! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Caroline: Wonderful..:-) HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
curtsying... |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
No honey, ya got it all wrong....that was a "burp" ya heard.....But I would have to agree with ya....he does have a way with words don't he?.....Don't ya just hate him?...Geeesch! He probably looks like one of them bugs he seeks out, but has all these ladies at his feet worshipping him cuz of that poetry stuff he writes....whatta guy! Nice poem gal.....now then, think of some really "good" subject to write about and you'll have this poetry stuff down pat!!! |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Many thanks for all of you... Balladeer's "Fourth Tenor" reminded me of this one (I wrote it a long time ago!) and I thought to post it for him as we obviously are both fans of the opera Toe!!! *LOL* Didn't you see the "disclaimer" at the bottom? This was actually inspired by a superb Italian singer named Andrea Bocelli. But I'd give Balladeer a listen! LOL...oh and btw...I've seen him...he doesn't look like a bug at all!  heheheh------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Beautiful !! |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
I’m sure I can hear his voice in those words, your such a romantic writer Caroline much loved thank you. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautifully done, Caroline. ------------------ Michael Anderson Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? |
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