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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA 
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The first sign was ~CAUTION~... Please be aware... That he doesn't want you... Your love he won't share. Then came the ~STOP~ sign... Take control of your life... He'll only bring heartache... troubles and strife. But I wouldn't listen... I just saw the sign ~GO~... So I sped ahead... And then you might know. Yes...I got a ticket... I have to pay the fine... Of hurt...tears...and anguish... For ignoring the...~SIGNS~!! |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Your writing has been so sad lately, Kitty**  But I like the metaphor in this one-very creative.------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." "Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..." |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very clever! Enjoyed the read Kitty........ ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very clever, Kitty! Well done! ------------------ Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kitty, well done really enjoyed the read. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Loved it! I must pay more attention to traffic signs. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Good, Kitty. Sometimes you have to YIELD. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
We tend to ignore those feelings and blow by them. I really love the way you did this!!!! I'm sorry your feeling so blue! Hope things get better for ya soon! |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
So sad!! *Hugs* Hope things are better. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is very clever kitty, yet so sad,hope things look up for ya soon (((hugs))) ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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