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Kitty**
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0 posted 10-25-1999 08:22 PM       View Profile for Kitty**   Email Kitty**   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Kitty**'s Home Page   View IP for Kitty**


The first sign was ~CAUTION~...
Please be aware...
That he doesn't want you...
Your love he won't share.

Then came the ~STOP~ sign...
Take control of your life...
He'll only bring heartache...
troubles and strife.

But I wouldn't listen...
I just saw the sign ~GO~...
So I sped ahead...
And then you might know.

Yes...I got a ticket...
I have to pay the fine...
Of hurt...tears...and anguish...
For ignoring the...~SIGNS~!!
© Copyright 1999 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-25-1999 08:28 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Your writing has been so sad lately, Kitty** But I like the metaphor in this one-very creative.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."

Pepper
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2 posted 10-25-1999 08:36 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Very clever!
Enjoyed the read Kitty........

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!
Denise
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3 posted 10-25-1999 10:13 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very clever, Kitty! Well done!

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Denise
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4 posted 10-25-1999 10:19 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Kitty,
well done really enjoyed the read.
Ohme
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5 posted 10-25-1999 10:33 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme


Loved it! I must pay more attention to traffic signs.
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6 posted 10-25-1999 11:05 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Good, Kitty. Sometimes you have to YIELD.
WhtDove
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7 posted 10-25-1999 11:15 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

We tend to ignore those feelings and blow by them. I really love the way you did this!!!!
I'm sorry your feeling so blue! Hope things get better for ya soon!
Watcher666
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8 posted 10-26-1999 04:33 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

So sad!! *Hugs* Hope things are better.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Dark Angel
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9 posted 10-26-1999 07:12 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

This is very clever kitty, yet so sad,hope things look up for ya soon (((hugs)))

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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