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PdV's Halloween Challenge (pantoum)

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Satiate & Alicat
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0 posted 10-25-1999 01:46 PM       View Profile for Satiate & Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Satiate & Alicat

Eternal Love -- Alicat

My lover true will never die
She draws her final shuddered breath
Her rosy cheeks give birth to lie
My Satiate dances with Death

She draws her final shuddered breath
Her cheeks still full of rosy hue
My Satiate dances with Death
She quickly cools before my view

Her cheeks still full of rosy hue
I know I'll never let her go
She quickly cools before my view
But no one ever needs to know

I know I'll never let her go
As she was such a pretty lass
But no one ever needs to know
She's underneath the table glass

As she was such a pretty lass
She'll stay with me until the end
She's underneath the table glass
And I can always play pretend

She'll stay with me until the end
Her rosy cheeks give birth to lie
And I can always play pretend
My lover true will never die


My View From Down Here--Satiate

He stuck me underneath the table glass
Well now my friends, isnít this just swell?
I feel like a mounted and stuffed striped bass
And ewww gross I think Iím starting to smell!

Well now my friends, isnít this just swell?
The rosy cheeks he loves so much will bruise
And ewww gross I think Iím starting to smell!
Itís good that we wore the same color rougeÖ

The rosy cheeks he loves so much will bruise
My make-up he does each day without fail
Itís good that we wore the same color rougeÖ
He pays such close attention to detail

My make-up he does each day without fail
Death like this would only happen to me
He pays such close attention to detail
Certainly something I did not foresee

Death like this would only happen to me
All this time I thought he was such a prince
Certainly something I did not foresee
Heís a few fries short, I need not convince

All this time I thought he was such a prince
I feel like a mounted and stuffed striped bass
Heís a few fries short, I need not convince
He stuck me underneath the table glass


Satiate & Alicat, the twitterpated twinkies
© Copyright 1999 Satiate & Alicat - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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1 posted 10-25-1999 04:48 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

LOL..Liked this much!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Marilyn
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2 posted 10-25-1999 04:54 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

I thoroughly enjoyed watching these come together in class. I give you both A+'s, I don't know about Nan.
sparrow
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since 10-22-1999
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3 posted 10-25-1999 04:56 PM       View Profile for sparrow   Email sparrow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit sparrow's Home Page   View IP for sparrow

Double the fun eh?

It works, good read!

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Lucie
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4 posted 10-26-1999 08:48 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

I like the humor and the horror in this one. So I'm sending it back to the top!
Poet deVine
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5 posted 10-26-1999 08:54 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Challenge met in superb double fashion!! I loved these!
Pepper
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6 posted 10-26-1999 09:00 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Wonderful!!

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!
Denise
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7 posted 10-26-1999 09:53 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This made my night! You guys are perfect for each other!

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Denise
hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 10-27-1999 09:06 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I liked these in class and even more here posted together...well done
WhtDove
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9 posted 10-31-1999 01:31 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Munda
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10 posted 10-31-1999 05:56 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Very well done ! LOL, you're quite something !
Munda
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11 posted 03-05-2000 10:29 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Yep this one I rember very well ! It was a lot of fun these pantoums  
uhhhhh nr 25 ! LOL
 
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