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The clime of time

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 10-25-1999 01:28 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

The clime of time

June of nineteen forty two
That is when she came to view.
Not to my eyes but to my heart,
With just a tweak a twinge to start.

She smiled a fatal smile at me
That touched the edge of flattery
And I was smitten overall,
Almost completely I recall.

When we touched the magic flared
It blossomed to a full declare.
And I was stopped in awes derail,
By the voice of a nightingale.

Or so it did appear to me.
Eyes of the heart see differently.
They see within a new born clime
That has nothing to do with time.

Years have flowed though I'm not aware
And the mirror shows a difference there.
But I don't see the mirrors view.
For I'm still back in forty two.

To me it's always forty two.
For that's the way my heart sees you.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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1 posted 10-25-1999 01:39 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

True love never grows old, Seymour, a beautiful poem.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?


Marilyn
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2 posted 10-25-1999 01:52 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Delightful Seymour...Absolutely delightful! This is how love sees the world. Not in the age that we live but the age of the heart. Very well written my friend.
Pepper
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3 posted 10-25-1999 02:03 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Oh my!! Love this one, I do!!
Very sweet, very beautiful.....
Sigh....Sy

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WhtDove
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4 posted 10-25-1999 02:07 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Seymour this was wonderful and touching! Just as love should be viewed. May your views never grow old! ;o) Loved it!
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5 posted 10-25-1999 02:09 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Lovely, Seymour!!!
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6 posted 10-25-1999 02:12 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Really well done Mr. Tabin.....I too liked this!!!
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7 posted 10-25-1999 04:49 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

So sweet! Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Martie
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8 posted 10-25-1999 05:47 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Beautiful Seymour and you picked a great year--my birth year.
Severn
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9 posted 10-25-1999 06:49 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Beautiful, Sy - simple never.
Ohme
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Seymour, I don't believe anyone could ask for anything more. Very beautiful poem and certainly a precious love.
Craig
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11 posted 10-25-1999 07:18 PM       View Profile for Craig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Craig

Your poetry is always worth reading and you never disappoint. This one is as brilliant as the rest or even a touch more so.

Well done.
Denise
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12 posted 10-25-1999 09:33 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Seymour, most lovely. God bless the two of you.

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Denise
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Brilliantly done, Sir Seymour. I do love to read your poetry You express yourself most beautifully.

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 10-25-1999 09:56 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

To all the above my heart felt thanks. You have filled with treasures of my Ivy tower.
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15 posted 10-25-1999 09:59 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Nothing to say that hasn't already been said, so I'll just say a simple "good job!"

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 10-25-1999 10:46 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Lizzy,
Your good job means much to me. *L*
Nan
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17 posted 10-26-1999 07:16 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

The world needs more men like you, Sy....
Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 10-26-1999 12:19 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Nan,
You mean more "yes dears?" LOL
Julie
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19 posted 10-26-1999 12:37 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

So sweet Seymour...your words open to a page like the opening of a fresh rose.
Sunshine
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20 posted 10-26-1999 03:03 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

I'm so glad to see one who has kept his word, and his wife.

Well done, and thank you, Sy, for giving the rest of us hope. Now, just print out all of your rules...
snow in summer
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21 posted 10-26-1999 08:45 PM       View Profile for snow in summer   Email snow in summer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for snow in summer

Yes, I said it before, and I'll say it again. You are a true romantic.
Seymour Tabin
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22 posted 10-26-1999 10:19 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Julie,
Your making me blush like one, thank you so much.
Sunshine,
Read An ordinary man and thank you again for your response.
Snow,
Yes I am a romantic and thank you for the comment.
hoot_owl_rn
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Oh, I do love this piece, wonderful Seymore
Seymour Tabin
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24 posted 10-28-1999 12:07 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Hoot,
Could not let it dissapear,
without a thank you my dear.
 
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