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Winter Morning Welcome

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Watcher666
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0 posted 10-25-1999 12:43 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Pain rolling across my head
At times like these I'm better off dead
OH God! Do I really have to get out of bed?

The sun is up, but cold are my toes
My eyes are red and stuffed is my nose
Well to be honest I'm totally froze

The alarm is blaring, but I don't care
Damn but this is just too unfair!
I'll just snuggle up with my bear

An hour past and the alarm still rings
Now even the damn bird sings
This is what the morning brings

Then in a move so totally bold
I jump in the shower and horrors untold
Cursing and yelling about this cold!

6 inches of snow has just struck
I'm late for work, in traffic stuck
Winter is here, just my luck!







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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
© Copyright 1999 Watcher666 - All Rights Reserved
Munda
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1 posted 10-25-1999 03:51 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

You only feel like this on a winter morning ? I feel like that every morning ! LOL Loved it ! ; )
Marilyn
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2 posted 10-25-1999 03:59 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

I can relate to this my friend. It is only Fall here but it is dark when I get up and by the time I am through with the kids activities, dark. The chill of snow threatens in the air and cold's abound. I am ready for spring again and winter hasn't hit yet...LOL.
sparrow
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3 posted 10-25-1999 04:34 PM       View Profile for sparrow   Email sparrow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit sparrow's Home Page   View IP for sparrow

Enjoyed it!

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Balladeer
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4 posted 10-25-1999 04:54 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Winter? Whazzat?

(you have my sympathies)
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 10-25-1999 05:37 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Don't remind me...LOL
Martie
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6 posted 10-25-1999 06:19 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

It's 95 in Calif. today
What is this winter anyway? Great poem--I did feel a chill as I read it.
Severn
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7 posted 10-25-1999 06:52 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Hehe - I'm just entering a lovely lovely summer...mind you having said that, that means I'm still here and not in America which means I'm still divided...you lucky thing!
Like the poem btw - simple and effective.
EnglishRose
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8 posted 10-25-1999 07:03 PM       View Profile for EnglishRose   Email EnglishRose   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for EnglishRose

good job sis, liked it a lot,,,

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"A Rose by any other name..."
Ohme
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9 posted 10-25-1999 07:08 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Love the poem Watcher.
This is the feeling I used to wake up to. But now that I'm retired, wake up at the same time, just go back and hibernate some more!
Denise
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10 posted 10-25-1999 09:44 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yep, yep, yep....winter stinks! I think we should all move to Florida or California with all those warm wonderful poet friends of ours! .....LET'S GO EVERYBODY!

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Christopher
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11 posted 10-25-1999 09:50 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Brrr....I think I've seen snow before...
On my TV in warm sunny California!!!
caroline
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12 posted 10-25-1999 10:13 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

The only time I see snow is when I shake those little snow globes...LOL. There is a cold front over my part of Florida now...its in the 40's tonight. I love it!

Come and visit, Watcher!

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 10-25-1999 10:23 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Watcher,
I can relate to this, but from my past. I moved to Florida. Well done.
Alwye
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14 posted 10-25-1999 10:37 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Exactly watcher! I live in Minnesota, and I know exactly what this feels like...good work!

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller


wayoutwalt
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15 posted 10-26-1999 04:10 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

blagh watcher not bout the poem loved it but i just got over a cold yucky o and we even get em in texas and not everyone is a millionaire
RSEvans
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16 posted 10-26-1999 07:20 AM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

Yesterday was our first below-freezing morning here and people are already comparing this year to last and saying, "Was it this cold this early last year?" A frustrating experience to realize summer is gone. Well written.

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Watcher666
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17 posted 10-26-1999 09:07 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Thank-You all for reading.Just a day in the life of the Catskill,where there is 9 months of winter and 3 months of poor sledding!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
tori
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18 posted 10-26-1999 11:22 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

lol.. sounds like me every morning.... cept the snow... don't do snow.. hot house plant here.......just sleep in!
 
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